Your writing is really cool, it draws me in. I like how you describe the fight scenes. It's an interesting read, properly executed. Keep up the good work!
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yall better read this novel..
it's a pretty good and amazing read...
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I finished the raw, it is quite great, not bad and acceptable. The Author considers when is the right time to put a certain plot so it will not be a filler. Well, conquering empresses and forming a harem took atleast 217 chapters E hmmm, I have a lot to say but it seems my thoughts cant be processed clearly in my mind, so yeah everything is great
As usual shameless author review here. I’m new as an author so mistakes are bound to happen, but don’t worry I will definitely improve as times goes by. So critics are welcome! i look forward to your support, and suggestions.
Female lead who only relies on her own hard work and wit instead of some magical space, I like that.
Great novel, where are you Author? It’s been 1 Month.Currently chapter 146 but I don’t want to continue knowing it’ll end in a bit :o
Shounen derived pathetic mc, the plot is nonexistant, while the character was a little believable at first then he completely turns into some dumb self justifier, half the chapters become him cheering and hyping himself the other is him pouring his insecurities to be left alone, you might call it character development but he is an adult what is there to develop? he turned into a pathetic loner, now that he has something that could completely dominate the world he gains motivation to do something?, that observe analize act bullsh it during the fights were especially cringy, every heard of mike tyson? everyone has a plan till they are met with a punch in the face. I guess you didn't receive any.
I read all the available raws and can confidently tell you to go ahead and enjoy the novel. It's sooo good and will make you crave for more.
So the grammar is good as far as I have read, and although this is not the genre I usually go for, I must say that this book is worth complimenting! Keep up with the good work!