Magic Eater

Shounen derived pathetic mc, the plot is nonexistant, while the character was a little believable at first then he completely turns into some dumb self justifier, half the chapters become him cheering and hyping himself the other is him pouring his insecurities to be left alone, you might call it character development but he is an adult what is there to develop? he turned into a pathetic loner, now that he has something that could completely dominate the world he gains motivation to do something?, that observe analize act bullsh it during the fights were especially cringy, every heard of mike tyson? everyone has a plan till they are met with a punch in the face. I guess you didn't receive any.

[Reviewed on: 12-06-2021]GOOD POINTS:- Comical vibe through the chara of female demon/devil- MC is reasonably smart, not too dumb to cringe at all- The flow and pace is fine too- Apparently there are no issues in grammar [will explain further below]- Storyline somewhat resembles 'my pick up artist system' but no it's not a fanfic- MC has a goal to achieve or he will die- At first it gave me 'death note' vibe, then the devil felt a succubus to me as she emerged- It was entertaining~WEAKNESS:- Synopsis doesn't really tells what's inside, it should be more elaborative on the contract aspect- The initiative strategy in chapter 1 is extremely wrong- No one wants to read the routine of MC, his house, work, what he is wearing, food, etc- The narration is in personal/1st person but the repetition of 'I' is annoying, in about five lines 'i' is overly used seven times!- 1st chapter should have begun by the later half, the upper half is completely dump in my opinion. Since 2 and 3rd chapters are without fillers and absolutely good with hooks, while 1st [initial half] is a turn off.- Devil can read his mind but at places she doesn't respond to his thoughts, why?

Bit late to the party for this. A bizarrely light hearted novel for those with good taste. I wasn't expecting something this enjoyable going into this but I must say I'm pleasantly surprised.This is a borderline gag novel so there isn't a need to go too deep into the novels details but it is a fun, semi serious novel with a fairly likeable protagonist. Standard but sensible worldbuilding, characters and power systems. There're only 19 chapters right now so all I can say about the story is that it's not bad so far.For once, there are no signs of any bullies, jealous 3rd rate antagonists, young masters, "school belles" and other tiresome tropes in sight. That alone is a huge plus personally. Most side characters are actually a little bit likeable. 4/5

Worthless translator, audacity to call his readers ungrateful brats but actually expect us to pay soul stones for chapters? What happens when us ungrateful brats leave his ass for the dogs? Pitiful, no maturity, actually makes a livelihood off us readers and our donations but can call us brats. Anyways enough of this rant and forget this trash attitude translator.

Oh my god.. a book of Er Gen!!! this got to be good... :)wohoo >.

noice...love it ..mc so cool.. can't wait for more