Dungeon of Pride, Laplace

I highly recommend this book to anybody who is interested in fantasy novels. This novel is currently one of my favorite novels and the novel keeps getting better and better. So I highly recommend reading this novel.

INITIAL THOUGHTS:
-Ive recently caught up again with the chapters I stockpiled and decided that I wanted to give potential readers a window view of this great novel.

WRITING QUALITY:
-The short answer is Top Quality.

-The longer answer is the author has done a great job of keeping the writing understandable using proper grammar structure which for what I call “Original Authors” is something that doesn’t always happen. When this novel plateform first started and for most of it’s inception afterwards you’ve had Chinese authors hiring translators who have a high level of English proficiency. This lead to a quality of content most of us readers got used to and only really noticed with new authors exploded on the platform. Overall 5/5.

UPDATING STABILITY:
-Consist from beginning to now. Averaging 1 a day or 7 a week it’s much better then many authors who seem to burn out after releasing at least twice that amount. Overall 5/5.

STORY DEVELOPMENT:
-Anyone who has read a fair amount of novels knows that their isn’t one universal story development. We read many decent to masterful stories with varying plots. What we do know even if we can’t put it into words is when a story progresses badly. This novel happens to fall into the great category.
-The Main Character (MC) is transported to a cultivation world with many underlying mysteries that accompany his beginning. Most of the time we stick with the MC seeing his progress while at times be shown other characters that add to the overall world in a way that connects to the MCs progress now or in the far future. This is great for a number of reasons
-One is how plot points are not only made in the short term, but also in the long term making many events that  were a mystery unfold naturally. So while some plot points seem too distant to connect at first get gradually uncovered showing there deep implications. Two many people introduced in different factions and power levels are having a major effect on the story developing in ways we have yet to understand.
-Overall I see great things for the story now and later. 5/5.

CHARACTER DESIGN:
-Short answer again is great.
-The MC is positioned in the world as someone within and outside of it. Living a life as a human before and a demon now is taking the best of both worlds so he becomes someone who can make a impact. Ruthless and kind. Distant to some close to others. Prideful yet humble enough to recognize his faults. One of my top MCs.
-Close characters are multi dimensional showing there support for the MC and the greater story development. Slowly but surely we see a group form around the MC each bringing color to what could have been a solitary life. I don’t want to give spoilers, but I’ll say that 2 females closest to the MC each bring out more sides to each other’s character development. Overall 5/5.

WORLD BACKGROUND:
-Deep and mysterious. The MC is slowly unveiling through his exploration what seems to be a complicated world. Many races known like Demons, humans, and dragons while many more briefly mentioned. Also various Apex wars that have happened for reasons unknown. The list goes on and on leaving wanting more. Overall 5/5.

While I have not caught up with the stories release I’m at around chapter 175 as I write this.
This has been an excellent and well written story thus far.  Very few minor grammatical mistakes to be seen.
While I can’t say much about the stability of uodates as I’ve not caught up completely.  I see the updated mark consistently enough on the story to know that it is being written by the so author still.
Story has been progressing well.  There have been times that I’ve felt it’s been slow and there are other times that it picks up the pace.  I am not a big fan of the repeated paragraphs from previous chapters in the new chapter that this author does.  It would only be useful if the author didn’t update for like a month and I needed a refresher on what happened previously.  As it is I consider it unnecessary padding to increase the word count of the chapter.
Characters so far have filled what I consider the anime cookie cutter.  We have our kind hardworking but determined ML, the cold but warm FL (whom gets described every time she shows up.  We get it she’s as pretty as a goddess.) And now we have the cute bratty little sister character.
The world is very interesting and vast and we aren’t overloaded with facts.  They are wonderfully peppered throughout the story.  So we are learning about it along with our ML.  Which I enjoy immensely.
All in all a very solid good book.  Worth reading and spending your fast passes or coins on.

I like the story, but i dont like how it use so many chapter for filler that should be able to finish in a couple of chapter. For example it use so many chapter about how mc watching a fight from afar while the one fighting is only a filler character that is just goong to die

I have a question, what control does he have to prevent the betrayal of his summoned people?...............................
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i m not good at writing review so just my honest take on the novel so far.

-pace is good most of the time but sometime quite slow
-i don know about others but i really like if you give more detail out for the character. just my opinion on this one
-i believe when theres a great battle about to happen you could just delay some of the chapter  and then boom mass release so we could feel the fight more closely
-thats all, for me this novel is good