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Absolutely brilliant. Don’t have anything bad to say about this book. I was so absorbed reading it my eyes got dry. Thanks to the author for regular updates and caring about the readers!
This novel has a lot of potential, but like most novels on this app, it suffers from a lack of proficiency in English. Making an overall pretty unbearable read for me.
If semi-broken English is not a problem for you, give it a try.
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It’s very good so far and its worth the read.
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FYI, Its a bery Dark novel with a pure evil MC.
A stroy about a broken soul aspiring to become a god. The journey starts with our MC, Who’s fooled by a “Different World System”, And is taken to a low magic world where the system gets the MC killed to get his Protagonist Halo. The dead MC’s broken soul wakes up but also looses his humanity. To survive and become strong he becomes “Negary” god of Misfortune and is no longer “Wang Yuan” the human boy. Follow his journey as the poor broken soul no longer differentiates between good and evil and just believes in strength. It’s Somewhat like reverend insanity but here he is doing all of it just too make himself A god, Not because he has too but because he wants too. As one of the reviewers stated The MC here is a complete opposite of “Klien” from Lotm who’s whole purpose was to maintain his humanity while becoming a god, Here He lets go of everything to become a god.
The world background is great and has a lot of depth. The character development is also very logical, You can practically see how he changes unlike most of the novel where there is so called character development of him becoming “Mature” for “Immature”.
It’s a really dark novel. Good read for people who want Evil MC.
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One of the best cultivation novels here. It has depth, the characters are great, and there was so much plot in just sixty chapters. Highly recommend to every ***** reader
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!
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It's actually very interesting. There's a lot of concepts and ideas going around. I personally liked how they both cheated on each other than after a moment of pride, they confessed. I also really like the poem. You should do more of that.
But please use paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to read. It looks disheartening, so probably a lot of people wouldn't give it a chance because of how gigantic the paragraphs look.
