all right. this is just the early chapter review, but I found the writing quality solid. as I have seen the author's improvement in the last work, I'm sure he has planned the whole story. 1 thing I didn't like that much in previous work is it followed cannon for a bit long, and manipulation of novel and never falling in love. though that won't be a problem here since this is original and mc is a demon god. so I'm guess he won't be falling in love. but I hope that he is not detached from all emotions. i don't wanna follow an emotionless MC's journey. at least he should have acquaintances. i hope he marries and have child(in later parts of the stories). and have at least some emotional attachment to people. especially since he was a human once and transmigrated. I'll make another review after 100 or so chapter when plot has moved forwards, but right now it has solid mc and good world building.
What do you think?The guy tried nine times, each time he had a full year to prepare, Would going back in time really change anything?He may be able to win the first time because he knows the competitions game better than they know themselves, assuming he's smart enough to remember, but after that?
5 stars all across the board. This story has wonderful potential and would recommend it to anyone that just got here. Dear Author Please write more!!!
Writing improves as the story progresses(grammar, vocab, etc.). A great start of the protagonist's adventure to revenge.Writer have a writing style of first person perspective, solely focusing on the main character and events happening around him including his thoughts and thinking processes.Overall, a great story.
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it was soo amazing!! now i'm left wanting for more :(( I suddenly feel empty..well thank you author-san for your work and hope you keep us updated !!
I don't who is giving power stones to this novel. It is such trash. ML got cuckolded, he saw his wife in a hotel room cheating him, she seems to be pregnant with someone else child yet he still got together with her. What the f**k is that. Nice plot but the author ruined it. Plus this novel is pure torture, read at your own risk.
noice best best
ayo new urban cheat garbage just dropped. whoever started this genre will probably forever live in fear of the monster he created. im desperate for entertainment, never thought i'd fall far enough to unironically read an urban novel that doesn't have cultivation or a funny plot/gimmick. 1.5/5.
Lol it's always the terrible ones that get chosen it's so depressing that it's almost funny. Face slap face slap face slap ahahahahahhahahahaha so good
STRONGEST ON THE ENTIRE SIGHT! I take offence to that. Anyway it seems like something I would read so here is 5 stats for making me laugh…….
Well i think this is very swell writing that takes a lot of creative thinking i don't think i can do that myself cheers to the author and ride on