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Bravo on the synopsis! Couldn't have made the plot any more clear.
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Since many people have asked whether Ling Yun's customers are still having intimate with their husbands or not, I will answer it here, and I hope no one will ask about this matter again.
Before the story started, Ling Yun had ten customers, but I didn't write about their relationship with their husbands in detail except for one woman.
However, there was no intimate action between them, for her husband was a cripple.
Five of his customers were already divorced when they met Ling Yun again, and they had no relationship with other men.
Three of his customers are also still married, but there is no intimate scene between them.
As for the last customer, I won't say anything now. Up to the latest chapter, Ling Yun hasn't met her again, but I already have a plan for her.
I am not sure how people are praising the story. Because of them I went ahead and read till almost 500 chapters. After each chapter I had to convince myself that its still too early and maybe the good part is coming.
But no more.
The story is crap.
Overused cliches in the worst way possible. Author uses every single trope possible. Whether it's the carriage carrying some high profile , running through the city and killing people in the way or stupid enemies from auctions. Restaurant table cliche? Done...
MCs power is special. Bull ****. It's just devouring and increasing own cultivation. God of slaughter is the same, that War God Soul novel is the same, Eternal King is the same. I don't even remember how many novels are there which have growing spirit.
MC is also just a bull. Running everywhere without thinking of the consequences. An dlater he cries saying he needs to be stronger. And this has already happened 15-20 times in 500 chapters
Sect is basically the low level copy paste of all other novels. Including the Gangs inside and the sects top child being its leader. Boooriiiing. And sect fights every few chapters. Can't they fucking use something new? It's also done on the most boring way possible.
One good thing is amount of filler. It's less. But side stories are so much that it doesn't matters.
Overall rating?
Overrated thrash.
Waste of time.
U less you have nothing to read.
It's not the worst thing out there but it's just too monotonous and boring. It's like salted chips. Bland. And usual. Basically you can never go wrong with it. As its so tried and tested that it should get an award for it.
frustrating and stupid story!!!
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One of the major things I like about this book aside the plot is the character design and names. I feel every name fits the character's overall personality and that's pretty neat. It's not a new trope but the execution was nice, especially the prompt to see the MC's stats and stuff. I thought it was really good
truly perfect. its early but the genre is my favorite. since i cant edit my last review, here comes a new one. the writing quality is splendid with non existing errors. the grammar, spelling and words are choosen brilliantly and this makes it easy, fast and enjoing to read. better than some translators with records over the 1000th.
about the update stability isnt much to say since its written and not translated. but damn its fast. two new chaps in the last 4-5 hours? great man, keep up the nice work.
story development can be said as fast paced, but its logical and linear which avoids a feeling of rushing to the end and also repeated to just fillnup the chapters. the result is just a perfect and constant flow forward.
the character backround isnt truly deep, but who wants 10 chapters only to get known the character. every character got introduced so that they feel unique and easy to remember. here you see the formidable work of the author. he can display the character of the mc perfektly in the minimum words used during the progress of the story which greatly showws the value between a writer and a splendid author. He got it!
In the world background the author gets it too perfectly balanced between enough to get the feeling of the world but not too much to say this store got one brick few than the store neighbouring?
The story itself is about a midage with problems getting a system to overcome them and go on, go on , go on .... spoiler spoiler spoiler...
so this is one of the few novels on the net who deserve a perfect score 5/5. well done and keep up author. if u dont break up i will read till the end.
It's look good so 5 star and i hope you don't drop this novel it's ok yo take a break sometime but don't drop .........................................................................................
It started out p good until the mc gets reincarnated in a different world (for the second time). Then it drops off, also the system is annoying asf like fr It shocks him taking out health whenever it doesn't like what he is doing. After saying all that though, I would say that the writing quality is good and some ppl might enjoy the plot, so good luck author, however I don't think I will continue reading this.