Not going to lie, when you asked if I wanted to read this I didn't have high expectations but... I was thoroughly surprised. The prologue showed a great hook, I could feel her terror almost, the moment she gave up and decided to flee, the hopes that were given and taken from us... and then the MC's anger over things I won't spoil.
You do a great job of building a world and setting a mood. I can't think of any complaints beyond I want to see more about your characters and when's the next chapter out, I NEEDS IT! You don't need to hear it from me, but I'm going to say it anyway. I love your work.
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Superb. All I can say is that this is really well written. Every story is interesting and the characters are well designed, and their emotions are well projected and expressed. Cliffhangers were also good. Definitely worth to read until the last one, and I look forward for another set of stories to binge after this one.
Good Work!
it was really interesting
Just another reincarnation story, so if you have good ideas, suggestions or just complains let me know. I think this story could become something great...
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Haven't read it yet, but it seems like it'll be a short novel. It's already four volumes in at 40 chapters. It looks very interesting.
The story is good, although there may be some grammar mistakes, the story progression is good and the story is thrilling. Overall a good book.
Original and fantastic story...unusual relationship between detective and killer...the both of them are smart...the characters are not only transmigrators...alive or dead...they have chance go to the new world..everything is connected
Good premise, how ever terrible..... well, everything else. Characters are so 1 dimensional. That everyone that's not on the side of the main character is a bad person.There's no logic to how the main character gets his rewards, it just shows up, blatant plot armor, which I find is just terrible story telling. World building is terrible, like it doesn't tell me if the company that the main character just happens to fall in his lap is suppose to bigger, smaller, or equal to the power of his father/mother-in-law company/family. Story is terrible written, only a good read if you're in a brainless mood.
Do people really like this? I read this and felt that everything that mc gained is cheap, super cheap. He got super powerful talent, then, he got super powerful pets from the beginning, then, he also gets help from super powerful people. It is too easy and cheap.
This book is very well do I just wish their was more chapters but as long as at least a chapter a week is released i feel that this book would do wonderfully. keep up the good work.
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