better not read it's disappointing, It's an orc tribe yet he names his army like those lame chinese name and there ar more but you can decide after you read a few chapters. It's almost good but author keeps me disappointed with his plot.
I've been waiting for a good novel about ancient Rome for years, now I see that Zentmeister has created one and I have no doubt that it will be incredible.
a grand total of 110 kids !!!
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5/writing quality is great for the standerds of this site
3/ idk stability of updates
4/ good story development so far
4/ all characters are bearable and somewhat reasonable so far
5/ world background is somewhat unique and good
Good book but the author is absolute TRASH at titles like why not name it "Obelisk" or "The Great Monolith" instead of a cheesy title, quite literally describing the main character. Also never put the word system in ur titles it sounds lazy and of poor quality.
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Very very very very very very very satisfied after such a long time one trial read which is with it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
To be honest I like the story background but the inner writing I don't like it. Reading the first volume I think that the first disciple has no respect and gratitude for MC as her master, it's more like a casual respect not like a nascent soul stage cultivator master should have.
It’s an okay idea. It’s not original since there’s been novels with the same premise as martial spirits or battle souls, but it seems the author decided to use western names despite being in eastern culture. It really isn’t a problem for the normal reader except some cultivation fans. The problem is the grammatical errors. There‘d also some spelling mistakes here and there.
Suggest author install grammarly on his device. It would improve the novel. Anyway that all for now, might change my review in the future…
Should be cool to read
Just gave it 3 stars cuz y not
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first time i see something so bad in my life, all this story doenst seem to have any sense the didnt give anything out he is so plain sadly...........
It's super funny. I didn't think that a concept like this could exist, but the Author is making it work so far. hoping to see more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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the plot is good, the writings can be improved..all in all it's good
so pls update huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhhu