I honestly love the book it well written and the effort made by the author Is noticeablePlot development -excellentWorld building-excellentCharacter development-good
A great read, enough to forget about the unpleasant reality. A shame I can't buy anything since I'm Russian, but it'll change
I like this novel.. i like reading it but there are no more updates for such a good novel.. why is it always happens to good sports novels??? 1* for stability of updates.. i feel bad for good stories but cant do much about it because author of such a good passionate fantasy system story doesnot have any discipline.. too bad for people like me for giving power stones even without updates because we want to encourage.. i am a passionate reader but not wealthy enough to pay for privilege to undisciplined authors.. too bad for good sports novels like this and be happy with sports..
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isn't this just a kind of copy of, I have a martial arts panel? bruh thats kinda trashy since the name is basically implying a copy. can I get a rip in the chat.
I just read about 5 of your chapters and I have to say it's the most horribly cringe worthy work ever. Be it the MC or the ground work of your story or the content delivery which is like drivel of mistakes written by a 6 year old.......... Please improve.
Genre
Action Fantasy Supernatural
Cultivation Male Protagonist Modern Day Reincarnation Second Chance Sword Wielder
Author(s)
Disciple Of A Demonic Cult
魔道弟子
Artist(s)
N/A
Year
2019
Status in COO
324 Chapters (Complete)
Licensed
Yes
Completely Translated
No
Original Publisher
Qidian
English Publisher
Webnovel
Nice development and nice story background...
Nice main character settings and side characters settings..
Nice system settings (even though it look like familer )...
At first, this novel has an interesting concept. Thus, I read all the way to 500 plus chapters(after reading here, I go find the raw site and read further). However, because this is an interesting concept, it is very hard to maintain quality. After reading past 500 plus chapters, the storyline is getting old. MC still tries his hardest to lose money in the company but almost always fails. I see a huge flaw in this novel. If MC really wants to lose money so badly, all he has to do is develop his product poorly(barely pass the standard of the system), then put the rest of his money in the promotion of the product. This way, when consumer sees the product advertisement and try it then found out the product sucks, then they will most likely blacklist MC product in the future. Thus, MC will always lose money. Instead, in this novel, MC put a lot of money in product development which ends up having a good quality product, and then he hopes that no one will find it. This kind of thinking of MC causes him to fail every time (it is enjoyable to read this kinda thing at the beginning, but then it's getting old when this kind of situation keeps on repeating itself throughout 500 plus chapters). That is a major flaw, it is very hard to keep this storyline interesting with this kind of concept without making the reader feeling bored because the storyline repeats itself over and over again. Because even I can see how to let MC lost money every time (and I'm not in the gaming or entertainment industry). As said, all he has to do is produce barely passable product(in order to pass the system requirement), then put all his money into advertising the product, it is more likely that his product will have a bad review and lost money as a result. Sum it up, a very interesting idea for this novel, but it is hard to keep the storyline interesting.
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Review 1 - 5/12/19
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