Why did they start translating realms as "planes"?............................................................................................................................
the grammar was pretty solid in the few chapters I've read but I can't stand the MC. Still it's worth trying, it's probably enjoyable if you don't find him unbearable.
Here is my opinion after chapter 59:
This novel is among the bests in webnovel. I can guarantee it. The story and character designs are the very best. Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't Gary the best ever?! (readers will understand me).
The writing quality needs to be improved. The author messed up the pronouns quite a few times... by that, I mean her/him pronouns only. Other than that. A more consistent update would be better. At least 1chp/ day, so webnovel standard is reached. That's all the flaw I can say.
The characters in this novel are so fleshed out. You will feel the difference between this novel and every other novel on this website.
Oops I forgot to review one of my top novels after so long! (At chapter 508)
~ ima make it spicy then ~
Honestly the MC’s character progression is slow but I appreciate that there is a more realistic resistence to change. You cant expect someone to go from strong family values to ruthless killer at a drop of a hat. He does progress though so chill.
He isnt super OP or has any hacks/cheats. He has had a lucky encounter but his grind to the top is not smooth sailing at all. His talented friends keep up with him so there isnt a new group of people every arc... thank God for that because its hard Remembering so many names in novels! Also the depth each side character has is amazing and I ended up torn between main plot and wanting more side stories.
Harem? No harem? Not sure yet, the author is tight lipped but there is juicy romance! Romance is a very well written subplot but not a dominate theme (yet). Im still not completly backing any ship yet! I will point out that the authors closure/shut down of one love interest was so well done that even though i hated the character it was worth every word i read. She could make a come back though, who knows how they will progress because these characters arent just a one off appearence. Though IRL history does foreshadow a spicy adulterous return.
The unique flavour of this novel is its histories, myths and legends written into the plot. I love exploring Earths rich history through the plot while trying to google the history in the background. The undercurrents of the novel and its mysteries are closely tied with the above and make the novel so much more entertaining. So the world building is off the charts.
To summaries, there is a reason why this novel is consistently in the top charts and these rankings are not wrong.
PS - if you want a ruthless MC with a tragic backstory without the cringe edgelord vibe check out Blood Elf Monarch. Same brilliant character designs and mysterious plot but opposite vibe from this story. It was my first Avan novel too!
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the author doesn't know how to portray the character and is very naive.
man, this story got me so hyped that I want to keep reading more. I recommend keep reading. the author did a good job and I'm looking forward to a next chapter.
Holy. This is a story about an absolute idiot. He fully believes serving 3 years in maximum security prison, and being framed as a terrorist by his leadership is all part of his grand mission. To his utter surprise after 3 years half his family is dead, his name is tarnished and his little sister is about to trafficked into a prostitution ring. Even still, he's apparently the 'invincible lord' who is the height of personal power and supreme intelligence in the world. What kind of plot is this? What kind of protagonist is this?
Wonderful book that I hope will continue to grow into a masterpiece ................................................. .. ...... ... ... ..
The only thing I don't like about this novel is the fact that MC hardly has anyone who he can completely trust and can confide in(i am in ch 270), for example, his fiancee seriously loves him and although a bit yandere like still tries to protect him, MC also has good feelings for her (don't know if its love or not), but still instead of talking and confiding in each other he hardly talks to her even though she knows most of his secrets except a few. Instead of having a few true friends or lovers he can freely talk to, it's like he is playing mind games with the world and is constantly putting facades in front of even his closest people, and he ignores or forgets about a few important people(like his first girl victim). It's like the only use of the few girls he made fall in love with him when he had a choice to either kill them or subjugate them he chose the harder method for no reason instead of killing them which will give him much better rewards, and then completely forgetting them until something relevant to them happens.
The protagonist being a completely solo person while having a fiancee that was ready to go against the world for him is a serious letdown.
Except for a few such relationship problems of the MC, the story is pretty good.
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Quite fun. Hopefully it gets pick up this year.
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