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A brilliant novel, the writing is top quality, the story is great, its a slow paced novel but theres enough going on each chapter that the story keeps you engaged and wanting to read the next chapter. The character are all realistic and have their own strengths and weaknesses. Its a great read if your looking for a cultivation novel with an mc thats willing to do anything to gain power.
Writing quality is quite good. The stability of updates is good too and just to make sure, I checked the profile of author and it seems they have written quite a lot previous to this novel so if you're a new reader, just know this is the real deal. The story has good pacing. It's not perfect (this is obviously dependant on each reader so others might think it has the best pacing this world has ever seen and some might think otherwise, I'm just giving my opinion). Characters are described well and are given roles so they do not feel one dimensional. The only con I would say is the world background which I would right now rate a 2-3 star BUT the author said they are editing the novel so I will choose to believe in them. So if possible author, just add more details to the background to give a more vivid atmosphere. That was the only complaint that I had but everything else was good and I would definitely recommend to others.
Just by reading the book and the first chapters, I knew I'll get addicted! never blink once, there are unexpected things that can happen in an instant. good job author, such an exciting read!
I loved how the story was well paced and smooth. The description of the character and their emotions was well done. The explanation was vivid, relatable and also the words were efficient to imagine the situation.
It is relatable and wonderful plot!!
The story was good I like how u made the mc be hate by a lot of people have the the phone you can get in your life and that not to get you back you can get a call back and let go of your phone or call you bae I know I don’t have the answer when I’m going back to call me and call you bae I want something good I don’t
I haven’t read the novel yet but 5 star for true love! The synopsis touched all my weak points. I know I am going to love this. I just don’t know if the ending will be happy one
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Bad Grammar, not to the point of shty Chinese translators (which I would rather read), but nevertheless, bad in a way that doesn't make you choke, but endlessly annoy.
The plot seems cool, great even - nice, but the fact that Aaron (The system itself is so... idk)
The trope is good, but I think it has bad execution, especially the overly annoying dialogues involved. It makes it feel like, things that are tragic become comedic.
The timelines at the start are a bit messed up too. Well, not really, but going back to the forth from past to present just strikes a nerve.
I usually stick to, and bear to read even the trashiest of trash plots, but as of the moment, I can't bear this novel.
(I can also smell our fellow ph genes)
Hi author, I notice that you've started on a new story. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). If you are interested to know whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email amanda_nl21@*hotmail.com (delete *) for details.
It was really a great story...the language specially was very captivating and of course the story line so keep it up writing these stories they make a great time pass