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I came back to this book to build on chapters but holy..... this guy bringing his modern justice
It has been interesting to read this novel, the development of the characters in my opinion are well done, like the background story, you can see that you thought about your novel in the future, I hope to continue reading this fantastic work of yours.
**: I'm not very good with English and all this I wrote using the translator.
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Interesting novel. It's somehow unique than other novel I read.
Just hope this wouldn't end like some harem-anime, that would end up with many girls sad, cause the MC somehow choose just one girl.
I like the concept and the way that you don't make him overpowered but you give him an edge also the diversity you put between players with the perks and the freeness of the game is just awesome
wow I'm waiting
Honestly the concept of the novel is unique and great it my opinion but lacks quality to make it shine. the Grammer is atrocious for the novel making it hard to find much value in the plot and flow when it feels unpolished.
The interactions between characters are great but they don't flow well back and forth, this can be attributed with the bad grammar but it feels that at some points in the conversation they stop discussing a certain topic, jump to another one the come back to the original topic. it's hard to notice at times but a second read through and you'll pick up on it.
I understand this is the Authors first Novel and they are learning through the development of the novel. I just hope they can come back to the early chapters and edit it as well as not include flags of Brazil or America randomly in the novel.
This is a really great novel
Different from other system novels but definitely in a good way
The grammar is very good with only little to no mistake
As for the world building, that’s perfect too
This is a novel i would recommend to anyone
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You know, for a book with a simple and sleezy premise it has a lot of good moments. Frankly it feels a lot like the author makes it up as they go along, but so Ling as they keep their facts straight (and they do for the most part) it's ok. The main character is a very flawed person, which is slightly refreshing from the standard goody two shoes.
My biggest complaint is that the actual story doesn't start until about the halfway mark. The writing before that is important context but the main story doesn't start till midway in the book.
Overall I'd say a worthwhile read. An author more talented than I was expecting
Honestly, I'd throw my lot down with this novel just from its readability alone. Among the sea of broken grammar and sentences, this thing floats pretty darn well. Most mistakes are so minor that they'd be difficult to spot in a first read. As for the content, the story feels a little rushed at first, but it settles down quickly enough, forming into a straightforward and fun narrative that you can get used to pretty easily. Good work, would recommend.
Seriously, I'm not the fan of science -fiction so my review won't be helpful. Anyway, Good luck with your story. Hope you enjoy writing it.
All the Best.