InnocentFox
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Can someone tell me if he states as a goblin or changes please let me know
Here's a review from chapter 1-40
The story take place in a game where people can't log out, there isn't any specifics on what happens to the one who dies inside the game. The game is 'feudal lord' so it is a kingdom building game. Mc is a feudal lord (of course) and is basically similar to other novels like 'the world online, etc. Our MC has a cheat (well he is the mc), it's like a bug or error that maybe only he has. It is not really OP because the cheat is an achievement system where he needs to recruit special heroes(which are not easy to get) All I can say is his cheat is like a late game item that is kinda useless in the early game.
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Really interesting novel Description and I hope same goes for the novel
Not gonna lie your grammer is trash and you should probobly fix that but besides that you should also be more in depth about topics like when he lit the candel he mentions he has a sister but thats something that should have been mentioned when you introduced us to the uncle not on ch 40 Besides that you have a really Good idea it is like a 7/10 right now but if you could fix the grammer and plot holes its a 9/10 if not 10/10 story
Is the R18 tags for lemons or for gores?
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I really like this book, its about celebrities who want to live a normal life kudos to them though I'll like to see how they both fall in love
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FIRST PARAGRAPH GOT ME HOOKED.
I love this genre... I love the dystopian genre in general...
Now I can see the clear reason this book clicked on me as soon as I read it.
Kudos. Kudos. Kudos. Kudos to the author!
