Becouse i enjoyed this story a few years ago i wont make it all 1 star. Also you put it in the wrong place, since this isnt a fanfic.... and finaly i just want to ask ... did you get permission to upload this her from the author and/or the real translator? Thats all from me, bye.
One of my all-time favorite novels. A very unique setting that uses Xianxia genre's common themes like growing in 'strength' (cultivation), face-slapping moments, and awesome reaction chapters.
This novel is particularly difficult to translate especially since the author delves into many different literature/cultural fields in different languages, and then translate them into a Chinese background. You can expect to find a Russian poem or an American song that the translator then translates back into English.
Thank you CKTalon for introducing this novel to us, and thank you Legge for providing quality chapters at a good release rate. Welcome to our family!
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tl.dr: One of the best Chinese VR novels translated. Overall a top 5 online novels VR novel. Generic story-line, however well written, with somewhat flushed out characters, good combat system and an interesting plot.
--Characters--
Characters in this novel are often intelligent, however not overly arrogant. As of this review, while their was one unrealistic action the MC has done, overall their is logic to the MC. He tries his best to be low key, while not degrading into someone who is unreasonably afraid of achievement, while at the same time is not afraid to exploit his advantages to a reasonable extent. The time travel element, adds reason to why the MC does certain things. It is also refreshing to see a MC who knows when to retreat and not just mindlessly offend people, just to further the plot.
Unfortunately, the regrets before his rebirth, his girlfriend, and anything he did previous to his rebirth is completely neglected. The only relevance the rebirth has, is giving future game knowledge to the MC. There is no reminisce or drive that comes from the rebirth past the first few chapters.
--Plot (contains minor spoiler)--
The plot of the story is a generic plot in which the MC is reborn with game knowledge and uses this knowledge to obtain hidden advantages. As of writing this review (ch.51) the MC uses his knowledge to exploit a bug and solo a world boss, finds a unique item which he exploits to get an advantage over others(gold likewise), as well as strategies to clear dungeons. Though the plot is cliche, it works, other components are strong enough to cover this weakness.
--Combat System and it's Effect on Plot--
My personal favorite part of the novel is the combat system, which though not heavily covered, I believe adds lots of depth to the novel. The combat system is split into two systems the manual system, and the automatic system. Though initially the manual system is far less efficient than the automatic combat system through continuous effort, one becomes more optimal using manual combat. I believe that because the main reason for the MC advantage over others is mostly due to the innate knowledge of the benefits of the manual system, it makes the story far easier to swallow, then if for example, the MC found an OP item that made him better in any way possible. Due to the MC's constant growth through the higher completion of combos in the combat system, I feel the story is less stagnant then it would be without it.
--World Building--
Overall the novel does a good job at building up the setting for the novel. The massive effect this VR has on the world is sufficiently explained, with the flexibility of the VR world itself allowing for unique situations, such that its hard to make the story stale. The realism, in that there are still bugs and exploits, allows for the world to be more immersive, as it is easier to relate to, and overall the story does a good job.
Seems quite interesting and plus I love gaming novels and this also feels different from your usual gaming novel as I don't see an OP MC so I hope it's something new and refreshing and unique in it's own.
Yours one and only,
GOD OF ALL
Pretty interesting concept. Translation becomes pretty unbearable after his first reincarnation. Had to drop
Even though this book is new with only 6 chapters it’ so good already I love the character development and as a writer on here myself,it’ awsome to see where other people story’s start out as in the beginning ,I’m already a big fan
As someone who's read the novel on wattpad and loving the story development of what i read so far. I hope you upload the rest of the chapters On webnovel.
**: Can't wait for more chapter's for this awesome novel.
PSS: Are you also going to upload
Lost Fantasy? on WebNovel
I'm very disappointed here. Despite the promising beginning, after chapter 4 the story becomes just a copy of the novel Debut or Die. Waste of time...
Translator here: its a good story but mtl stops everyone from reading it . Hopefully I can make it slightly better. I am doing this for fun so expect there to be small changes at least ,for example, I could mostly remove the already little racists parts. For any suggestions comment
my favorite novel all the time
I'm so in love with this
very good, I just think (World Background) was very big (low, medium and high mortal plane) and (low, medium and high god plane) and (immortal plane, I want to think it's only 1).
Other than that, I really liked the characters and their interaction. Shot one of the best original xianhuan series of the site, congratulations