Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....Nice chapter and nice story line....
The story is about a reincarnated boy from earth in a futuristic world with beast taming. Mc finds a system that is like a hyperbolic time chamber but it is another world.The story seems to be good but the characters seem to be 1 dimensional but the most off putting thing is the grammar. The grammar is so bad that it seems the author doesn't know MC's main gender. Author if you have seen this please fix Mc's gender.
as I said before this is the updated review.good book for some people but not for me, Mc is a little beta (forgot the word I have in my mind) and didn't like NPCs character, if you don't mind Mc having weak personality (didn't find the right words for the description of Mc, this is the nearest description I could write) this book is good for u.liked author's previous work (portable something) and liked this novel's idea.good work author ?
The overall story is really good and I would recommend people to start reading this BUT I sincerely request people not to read it unless you are made of stronger stuff so as to cope with the plot holes and the machine translation.
I like your writing style but some how the king here was too self absorbed and dint come out worthy of this selfless mate. The way he let his mate physically and emotionally suffer, I felt he needed redemption and not straight forgiveness
This is great! I love every inch of the story. The characters are loveable, the world building is phenomenal, and each chapters are great! I'll can't wait for more to come!
pretty interesting :)
I did not expect to find a hidden gem like this, the start was fast, no pacing issues. The characters are aĺl interesting and the designs are cool. I especially like finn's inner monologues criticizing ppl's decisions in his head and his interaction with Iris. Their disabled duo relationship have really hooked me into this novel. Looking forward to how things develop between them.
Very good story, I really wonder why it isn't more popular. One does notice sometimes that english isn't the authors first language, but it does not break the immersion for me. The mistakes are mostly minor. Apart from that the story and characters are really great, I can absolutely recommend this novel. I hope it will become more popular in the future.
If you like intricate cultivation systems and cold MC's, this novel is most definitely for you. I had/have a lot of fun writing Ryu and GAB martial world and hope you have as much fun reading :)
Hello there, shameless author here! Well, I gotta say that for a story this long only 19 free chapters is too little, but they were 55 originally! thing is that they were too short (most not even reaching the 1k words) so I decided to stick them together. However, Webnovel locks a specific chapter, not a specific number, so the free chaps automatically got reduced.
However, the same content of those 55 chaps is still free, only that reduced to 19 chapters of about 3-3.5k words each! they are about 1.5k from there on, so those are still normal.
Thanks for the comprehension! This is a story I had lots of fun writing. I hope you have the same fun reading it! [img=recommend]
Its not that good but its not outright boring. I continued reading, then came the disaster. Every country except china is destroyed. Loving one's own country is good but demeaning others is not good. these chinese should grow up and respect other countries.