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Its completely ridiculous I love it
Excellent writing, and an interesting story to boot. The characters are unique, and the world is well defined up to this point. The pacing is also very good within it's genre. Definitely worth reading!
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Overall very average 3.5/5
The writing quality is sub par and just reads poorly.
The story itself is flat lacking pull. There’s a fixation on gods and trying to touch upon the human psyche which comes off very convoluted.
It is an interesting attempt at the over saturated idea of tower climbing for humanity.
If you’re bored it’s a moderately entertaining read with room for improvement.
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The story concept is interesting, but so many other factors ruin it for me. The MC says many things that just seem sexist. There are tons of run on sentences and grammar issues as well. Plus, there are some scenes that are so awkwardly written. Like discussing the skills of the group only to go on a tangent about how no one has enough mana to use skills and they will just have to attack any monsters until they die. If that's how it is, just skip the introduction and move onto the fighting.
An awesome zombie story, Mark is an amazing, down to earth character, and I look forward to seeing him survive this apocalypse! As well as making his mark on the world!
there's issues with the spelling, gramma and use of pronouns. I dont have an issue with this personally because its not terrible but it is there.
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