so, we got a very detailed five star review here, but unfortunately, it seems that webnovel deleted it...i dont know why tho...anyway, very fine details...except for the part where he mentions spirit stones scattered everywhere.cough cough (spoiler: mc needs an actual map to download, and unless the location/info is written, he will not know anything. the map feature of the system is only a digital print of a map)
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While I have already created one review for this novel I think I want to go into more detail about my thoughts.Writing Quality: This book has basically zero spelling/grammar mistakes and is fun to read if you like fantasy and magic! 4.5/5Update Stability: I gave this segemnt three stars as sometimes the author can go awhile without updating but I can’t really jude because every author has their own writing speed. 3/5Story Development: The story isn’t that fast but at the same tine isn’t to slow. It takes time to flesh out characters and the world that they reside in. 4.8/5Character Design/Development: If there’s anything in this novel that really catches my eye it’s the character design and development, each character has something to add to the story and each one has their own thoughts and feelings. Some are loyal and honarable and some are mischievous and scheming it has a wonderfull array of different characters and yet they arent so confusing that you loose track! Overall this is an excellent part of thr story. 5/5World Background: The book gives us a great deal of knowledge of the world of Aeon but but dosen’t drop so much on us that we forget half of it the next chapter. Also the world has plenty of mysteries that we have yet to discover or explore! It gives us knowledgein an easy to comprehend way.Overall 4.8/5Final thoughts: This book is great and here are some things to expect, The MC is not a genius and does not have a billion iq and is slowly learning about the world around it. The characters are impeccable and I could rants about joe good they are for a long time! Honestly this is probably one of the best books I’ve ever read, virtual and on paper. I will always read this book. I highly recommend! Overall I rate this book a 4.9/5
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its a really good book and it deserves to be recognised , i really like the setting as a vrmmorpg , gives those sword art online vibes , personally i like it
Going by the synopsis Clive would have a talent that is about 100,000 times worse than normal people. Actually really heartbreaking for such a human to exist. That means that what people can accomplish in 1 day Clive would need around 270 years.
hahahha im enjoying all these butthurt feminist here seething because the novel is not what they wanted
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im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
Petition to bring back "I Can See the Lines of Fortune"! A wonderful story to try, especially now that pocket hunting dimension is over. An all around interesting read! Please resume the translation of it! (Trying this as it worked for World of Deities)
Interesting read✅
No grammatical errors.✅
The main MC is great.✅
The story looks really interesting.✅
Looking forward for more chapters. ❤️
Keep up the good work