The potential of this story is incredible, I hope the author with the excellent work. Author, I understand that character development is necessary, but don't take too long because it gets frustrating after a while
This novel is good, too bad the pinyan makes reading this worse than getting an STD, seriously say "junior apprentice brother" like every other freaking translator, i can barely understand who they're talking about half the time due to the terrible pinyam.
Found it to be average at best. Tge MC is boring with no real development of world, character, and story. While I do understand that it's only the beginning and may just take awhile to Rev up as a trial read it's all I can go off of.
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its a very good book if you are into stories that evolve around history and facts. hint of past present and foreshadowing is amazing the future chapters have a lot of potential
This has a nice story and good flow it's has some small issues such as bad grammer and spelling. The biggest downsize to this novel is it's SUPERSLOW release and theirs ALOT of cliff hangers, if you hate this I wouldn't recommend this novel but if u got the time it's a decent read.
This was an awesome book, definitely not what I'm used to since I prefer fantasy and romance. This is a Sci-fi, medieval twist based novel. Excellent writing and perfect description of characters. For a character who thought he was ordinary, wasn't so ordinary at all. Great book. Short and sweet and descriptive.
it starts out great, but every thing is over explained , I guess it would be a great book for someone who knows nothing about video games, ill continue to read more when I'm less annoyed with reading every little thought and action someone takes
Pretty good, Although it's a repetitive plot there seems to be something new about it so keeps it interesting.
9/10
We'll have to see if there's gonna be any character development or plot thickens moments
It's amazing to read this from a perspective of someone who is unfamiliar with the surroundings and religious practices. It is difficult being in a foreign land all alone and being able to speak the language choppily. It's just refreshing.
I was also impressed by the amount of research it took to find a suitable phrase or quote for the opening of each chapter.
This was an amazing read.
This book is basically a school life, pick up artist, system hunter gate novel. Hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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