70: i was just about to be happy for ivan and ellen...fuck off freya
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Such a curious thing this is...
The writing is good definitely not reinventing the wheel or anything but compared to other works on here 10/10
I actually think the only problem i have with this premise based story is the lack of a centered perspective meaning there is no mc.
One last thing we don't know what the story is directly about.
Is it how the unveiling of naruto's past will change the future or how naruto will change.
The title sounds like a simp telling people that he's not ..................................................................................
Author here, i put this here on hiatus preparing more chaps and planning the story but now ima go full throttle hehe. Hope you enjoy my work!
Can anyone tell me the reason why a lot of people like the story ?, The story is really not that great just average.
Heres my review after reading though the latest chapter...
Overall this story is still in its eariler stages, but shows great potential. The MC as of now dosent quite have a clear goal, but given what ive read the author will given him sufficent motivation that any reader can accept and look forward to read for many chapters to come.
In regards to romance/ harem its well thought and feels natural given the MCs circumstances he is put though for his different members. An example, the MC's first girl after waking up in his new bodyhe discovers already has feelings for him. He on the other hand just left his previous girlfirend and is conflicted on how to approach the situation. To top it off the previous "owners" feelings are still there and are there to stay. Now ask yourself if you were in his shoes knowing you wont see your previous girl, theres a new girl in front of you that has no flaws you can think what would you do? The world wont bend to your whim just because you still have lingering feelings. Naturally you must adapt given the curent situation and make the most of it.
The cultivation system so far is well thought out and leaves room for growth. At the beginning it might be slower then some other stories so bare with it.
I hope after reading it you decide to give it a go. 104 chapters are free to read so read those first before making a hasty desicion on weher you like this novel or not..
Website : qidian china
Views : 7.60 million
Rating : 7.9(1421)
Chapters : 1398
Status : completed
Word count : 3.60 million
author rank : platinum
Damn, don't you just hate it when your tending to your farm and you conquer another place. Imagine going out to feed the chickens and BAM! Another place is conquered. Ah damn! I was just trying to feed the damn chickens
1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. Follow me for exp ;)
16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Deep blue the only thing limiting this novel from topping the charts is the update speed, almost every other novel up there release from10-14 chapters a week, this would also bring benefit in increasing your fan base, please do consider. It’s honestly s hassle to wait for such a great novel with such slow speed, I sometimes even think of ignoring it for a few months, yet I still give any stones to this novel whenever they are refreshed.
I really like this story, but honestly you guys should go and **** yourselves, there's no way I'm going to try and continue to read through this ridiculous paywall. Especially considering how poor the update stability has been. Have fun losing half or more of the dedicated readership you guys had before you all became a bunch of money hungry cunts. The only way I'll continue to read this is if I can find the chapters somewhere else for free. Fuck off