KangGalon
ELeven new chapters has came out today hope you enjoy them spend a lot of time last night to write down and publish harder than you thing anyway have a good day.
There are already people translating this novel for free. The quality is much better as well. The translator on here is so bad that there is no comparison. Stop being greedy and trying to steal other people’s charity work Webnovel. Especially when you will just drop the translation in a few months as you have done with so many novels on this site.
This story is kind of funny sometimes... Only sometimes... Characters suffer from brain retardness of maximum level. It's not complete shit like Lin fan novels. Considering release rate, it's better to read manga.
3 stars for both trans/stability of updates. 2 stars for story. It had great potential but... author couldn only create simple parody of wuxia. Characters? Please, no. Some of them are 1 dimensional... Even MC seems to be static. World background? Entire star for zero creativity.
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magician with a teaching system and his army of lolis doing stuffs. the mc is less crap than most of the ones here, less cringy and no nationalisms since its a fantasy world.
For first-time readers (and with higher Qi according to other reviews) this can be a very good novel. But readers with average Qi who are already well accustomed to this kind of portals + gamer system, this is an average novel, maybe even a little below that.
I'm not a professional critic so don't expect a complex analysis from a Google translator user like me.
I just found the novel in general average and the writing a little below average. It was not pleasant to read like many others we have out there.
I want to make it clear that average is not a bad thing and I intend to continue reading this novel, that was just my honest review.
Sorry for any erros, i used google translator.
this novel is probably one of the most original thought i have ever come upon with regards to themes on systems.. unique and wonderdully written you will never be bored with the way the author narrates the story of wang wei. kudos to you dear author and keep writing!
This novel is about Borrowing System, and this one is unique! The writing is easy to read, easy to understand and has an interesting plot that I came to like. The characters are likable and the flow of the narrative is awesome! The story development is in right pacing, not so fast and not so slow either. Overall, the story is entertaining, a page turner and makes me laugh. Above all a good read! Good job, Author! Keep it up!
The storyline is very interesting and I sure I'm going to fall in love with the book once I start reading it.
I am definitely adding it to my library
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it's a good story but you're doing the same as "reborn as madara in mha", well I'm not sure if it is the name but I think you know what I mean, anyways don't stop
Actually, I never read the story yet, but I give it 5*.
The reason?
Because I want that :)
