I am really enjoying this story so far. The world building, the pacing, the power scaling are all done really well so far. The characters feel interesting and the mc, despite that he’s now living a second doesn’t seem like some kind of monk with perfect control of his emotions or some ten year old that has no control over themselves. He was only 26 in his other life and didn’t inherit any new memories so his behavior feels accurate. His cheat is definitely powerful, but it’s something that will grow with him over time instead of being so fast that you can’t appreciate all the levels that are skipped over. Overall I really hope this gets picked.
A very fun read! Reminds me of this other novel in the site, Adjudicator of Death, was it? Point being, both MCs have a system, are geniuses (yes they dont rely on luck to win) and outsmart the government/police everytime.
Definitely should give it a read!
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I think this is quickly becoming my favorite book on here. The story itself is insanely good, and it continues to amaze me the more i read. the detail that has went into this story is ridiculous, much respect to the author for being able to tie so many things into this story. thank you, cant wait for more!
The author is a native English speaker based on his profile. So, my review of this webnovel is going to be more in line with that expectation and not the typical translation trash that litters this website.
Writing Quality- There's a few grammar mistakes but nothing too serious.
Story Development- For a while there the MC has some cultivation level dialogue going on and some typical thot in distress.
But, the biggest issue this webnovel has is the set up itself. Presently the MC is playing a beta test version of the game and it's been 70+ chapters. Like a normal person would think, once the beta ends all the data is going to be wiped. So that means almost the entirety of the story written until then is going to be a waste unless some BS story development occurs to change common sense.
Then we either have to deal with watching the MC rebuild his religion as some Nordic god again or deciding to be something else.
Character Design- There's some cultivation type characters which is pretty low brow everything considered.
Updating Stability- Consistent or maybe not? As a guy who's written 400+ chapters he spends an inordinate amount of time DCMA-ING bots that copy and paste his chapters onto other websites. Even threatens us the readers and not the bots he'll stop writing if the pirating doesn't stop.
World Background- It's fine, but the author wastes too much time having the MC go on adventures and fighting in dungeons. The guy is a god, not some two bit adventurer. He should be out spreading his faith, doing miracles, or god forbid fathering kids in the mortal realm like a typical god.
Just seriously, this beta test smorgasbord is do or die for this webnovel. If I was the author, I'd just wrap this up within ten chapters and than choose one of the typical demi-human races like the elves, dwarves, or the beastmen.
Humans are overdone, especially since you've already chose them during the beta test, you've done orcs in your other webnovel, and the probably villainous race "primal whatever" just seems a bit lazy since you get to make up everything about a made up race.
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The amount of frustation from reading this almost on par with OG, LOL.............[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!
I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!
I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!
The story is intriguing. The way the story is designed and how it flows is truly magnificent. Never read a grim reaper book but it looks it is worthy to read. As for as the story went now... is good.
All the best author.
this is a great story and while there are some mistakes along the way with writing and side characters which was already mentioned and addressed so this is great. if I could pay for more updates I would
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