So far so good. Interesting theme, would be great to see battles that Alexander was famous for in his life. Keep writing and churning out chapters.
Author here.
I hope this story is to your liking, and I apologise for the slow update. I just wanted to do longer chapters so it takes longer to write and edit... Would appreciate a vote or comment and any constructive criticism is welcomed.
Suggestions are appreciated and may find their way into a side plot or storyline so please. Thanks
Give this one a chance! If you can overlook the grammatical and spelling errors, there's a fast paced, action packed storyline here and the character design is incredible! I fell in love with the characters by the end of the first chapter. Keep up the good work author!
I hope the author/moderator doesn't delete comments that give true and real feedback, simply because it's not to their liking. Because it takes time and effort to give constructive feedback. I've seen them do it too often. And the only 120+ reviews have me wondering if that's the case, especially for a novel with 3+ mil views?.The concept of the novel is very good as it combines my favorite novel The Ultimate Evolution with the concept of doomsday/world ascension. World ascension is a novel type I really like after reading Battle of Ascension and to have it combined with the concept of my favorite novel had me hyped. It was to the extent that I had a novel idea after reading Ultimate Evolution and Terror Infinity a few years ago but with the aspect of History being the driver... but I guess this novel already used it ?u200d♂️. So it's no doubt that I like the concept.But this one is really disappointing. The MC's mentality is way too Beta and the novel too rushed. It's not a matter of speed leveling or the like, but that way too many instances are skipped or just barely glossed over which leaves readers confused. These don't make the novel "drop worthy" at least not for me because I love this type of novel, but it's still very confusing and very disappointing nonetheless.WQ 4/5: Very good writing quality if you ask me.SD 3/5: The beginning or at least after DD happens, the story seems overly rushed. Some may say that skipping some growth segments are obvious and deem it ok or at least it's not bad. But this kind of SD makes the novel very confusing. Half the time things are happening but I wonder why it's happening at all. It's like plots just come jumping out at you. So it's difficult to follow.CD 2/5: This is one of the worst CD I have ever seen tbh. It's already 80 chapters into the novel yet the MC is still as Beta as the first 5 chapters. He is still crying about morality every other chapter which makes it so difficult to read and very repetitive. Not to mention him constantly grasping unto the leg of the girl who is clearly using him... at least to me she is using him.UD 5/5: Best thing about the novel. 24+ chapters per week is really great, especially if you like this novel.WB 3/5: It's not terrible and it's not great. This ties in either the rushed SD from above. Because the SD is so rushed, after 80 chapters in, all I know about the WB is that it's some futuristic earth and the one city he stays in or around.... and of the 2 dungeons he entered.
Translation - kinda bad but readableUpdate - trial so nopeStory development - is ok as less number of chapters so not sure but it was not as bad as the other trial novels haveCharacter design - just okish World background- ?
Are you kidding ??? What the **** are you talking about man ? You are a biggest looser i ever seen in my life ! You was doing PIPI in your pampers when i was beating players much more stronger then you! You are not proffesional, because proffesionals knew how to lose and congratulate opponents, you are like a girl crying after i beat you! Be brave, be honest to yourself and stop this trush talkings!!! Everybody know that i am very good blitz player, i can win anyone in the world in single game! And "w"esley "s"o is nobody for me, just a player who are crying every single time when loosing, ( remember what you say about Firouzja ) !!! Stop playing with my name, i deserve to have a good name during whole my chess carrier, I am Officially inviting you to OTB blitz match with the Prize fund! Both of us will invest 5000$ and winner takes it all!I suggest all other people who's intrested in this situation, just take a look at my results in 2016 and 2017 Blitz World championships, and that should be enough... No need to listen for every crying babe, Tigran Petrosyan is always play Fair ! And if someone will continue Officially talk about me like that, we will meet in Court! God bless with true! True will never die ! Liers will kicked off...
Decent ......... at least better than the other ones ........... pick it
So let me get this straight. The game allows him to get stronger in real life, but only him. And only he has a store, and it's considered cruel if a game doesn't have in game purchases all of a sudden? Seriously?
My first try reading Web novel, and the writer is so good at portraying scenes about cultivation etc.. As it is his first try I would like to compliment him by saying "nailed it ??" keep updating on your novel, As fans we will be eagerly waiting for it ❤️❤️.
for people who like realism novel, then i recomended this novel for you, it has basic economic, and really build the story at slow pace. and yep to bad the weakness this kind of novel is, it really need slow pace to build up the story.
Just my two cents here but it was a pretty decent story. That lasted until he met a female human, where he proceeded to throw away the last 19 chapters, his backstory, his brain and his b*lls all so he could bend over backwards for this girl as if he's a 12y/o who just got introduced to p*rn.
If this story weren't Google translated, it may be halfway decent. The poor grammar made it so I couldn't even make it through the first chapter though.