Sounds sloppy and not well thought out. It sounds nice to have the full support of digital phone services in an ancient world, but that just seems distracting and then inconvenient to get invested into.
I have posted the first 50 chapters of the book when I realized the story would be better if I picked a omniscient / third person POV. Let me know what you think.
I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. The story is very captivating. Keep up the good work author ?
Thai is a very good story a matter of fact all your novels are good, I can’t stop reading these
novels by you keep it up ❤️..............................
It was really good, interesting. The story was brought up well I mean presentation was damn good.The awareness in the main character to be responsible and creative is adorable
Trash novel that’s written as the MC is a speaking to the reader and the MC is a retard. Its basically unreadable. Don’t know how it got to 400+ chapters.
The writing quality is great, but i'm not so sure about the story development as the MC getting OP to early, which typically doesn't bode well for later chapters .. but that only apply if it is a typical system story. It would be a pleasant surprise if the story is going an original route, but until then i think 3.5 stars is a fair rating.
They kept this garbage, really??u200d♂️. The books they got rid of was better than this, but you know editors choice and all??................
I love the book the mc is not an arrogant little ass who keeps offending every one he sees and does not forgive a women just because she is pretty. It’s very refreshing to see the mc be calm and ruthless and be dumb stupid and arrogant