The Heir of a Shattered Empire

Translation - kinda bad but readableUpdate - trial so nopeStory development - is ok as less number of chapters so not sure but it was not as bad as the other trial novels haveCharacter design - just okish World background- ?

The story and writing is really good. characters are interesting and early signs of world building shows promise. The only major problem is once you start paid chapters there are a lot of problems with inconsistency. titles, names, and gender pronouns switch and change frequently. This is a quality issue. I don't know what happened but this isn't acceptable.

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i just came here to randomly support the author?.the book is worth the read, you guys should give it a try as well. although there are some grammatical error but still ist worthy.More chapter please!

Yes, I have read this on RL so just asking are you the real creator or just a Pirate/thief Just asking?Also, STREAM VIEWERS DON'T KNOW WORDS OR WRITE BIG SENTENCES Cus limited time more people etc They get drowned out!

This ain't ex fantasy, This is a top king book, This book is surely going to come in top 20 of WSA contwest