I genuinely enjoyed this one in the beginning. I even ignored the first crumbs of nationalism to continue reading, but the further you read the worse it gets.
Sad really.
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The first thing that caught my attention was that amazing! Cover, but then I read it and I was even more amazed with the story itself. I like good characters and this story definitely has some amazing characters not to mention I'm a huge fighting junkie when it comes to reading so the martial arts? The perfect touch. Great read!
For this being my first Webnovel, It really sucked me in. It’s a great read, i like the detail that is put into the storyline. Please keep releasIng chapters, im hooked.
The writing was captivating! I enjoyed reading it and can't wait for more updates, the plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put this novel
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Nice to meet you fellow Daoist, I don't know how to say it. Your way to toss good ideas one after another to the story is like someone that I know that said drawing a long plot is just bothersome. It will be interesting to just make an interesting short plot, and then find a suitable path to continue the story.
It is a good way to write. And It will be fun. the reader will find the story is like a roller coaster, and it is addicting.
My only suggestion is don't make a plot that will make your protagonist too strong. You will find it difficult to make opponents who is stronger than him. And the story will stuck.
It was a fun novel. Thanks...
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Alright, where should I start?
The writing quality is fine. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's readable. Updates are perfect and sometimes go on a hiatus but that's fine since all authors do that. The story pace is perfect, though it leans on the accelerated part a bit. The designs of the characters are alright and the world background is gradually explained at a pace you are able to understand.
In my opinion, I say this is a great novel. The first few chapters (Probably around 30 chapters) are very meh, but they provide handy information. After that, the story gets better from there.
That's pretty much it...
Also, the smut chapters are very enjoyable... if you know what I mean...
Copy paste from bloodscryer's review on NU:Author's note from Ch. 588, explaining gender confusion due to errors in English fan translations.---To make a digression, some readers told me that the book has also been translated on the Internet, but there is a big problem, that is, the unified translation of "祂" into "he
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That Hurt.Actually, it is my first time reading Realistic Fiction, and seriously it strikes.I love the way the characters are explained physically and emotionally through their actions and not through a monotone para.Love your Work Buddy!May People never go through these scenarios.✔✔