it was going good other than some minor inconsistencies between chapters but after 78 it's all just random junk idk whats going on but I'm disappointed
It see to have a really good story line. The main character seams well rounded and well thought out. I hope his powers progress and he looks after the little girl.
the story is too slow till now chapters 86?the progress to kill protagonist is just barely there and this is like multi jump world type thing and he still barely making progress in his 1st world, and I didn't even like the protagonist,
five out of five simply for having the shortest first chapter and somehow still managing to make a serious story lol.
Okay but for real. I'd actually give this like a 3 or maybe a low 4. It is a kind of funny story. It uses dark horse styles of comedy with people mostly making short quick replies so if you don't like that you probroaly wont find this story funny. As for action. it has its moments. I feel like they could be a lot better but it gets the point across. The story is kind of cool. You got monsters and superpowers. It is really slow though. I was expecting this to be like a few chapters of world building but we're still only at chapter 20 and are still be givin questions. Some stuff still hasn't been explained and others are slowly being unraveled.
The powers are kind of cool. They take normal concepts and alter them kind of. Like you got your base fire power and this mad man said screw it and turned it into a fox. I like Chinese lore and mythology.
All in all this is an okayish story. I have fun reading it but then again I've never given any rank lower than a 3 so don't trust me.
Only if the translator have some what knowledge in english he would have not made so many grammatical mistakes and neither English sentence are translated. Please reverse time and change the translator so that not to kill good novel.
Enjoying the slower pace and evened out powers of this version instead of how the mc was wimp with op powers . really glad I got back to this one.
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Please continue the story. Dear writer
Nice enjoyable read. The characters all have different personalities that seem to fuse together quite nicely. I would say this is currently levels greater than your other novel in terms of character and world-building.
You don't dump chapters of information on us but rather use certain parts of information during crucial times similar to other novels.
Anyway, hope you continue doing what you're doing and make sure not to overwork yourself with school and maintaining both novels have steady updaate.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write more chapters soon so I’ll be able to read
Its an interesting novel with a really good concept although there's a bit of grammar mistakes its because the author is from turkey i think
This story is direct, concise, and focused. The writer writes every sentence with a purpose. These are usually strong elements of writing, and most stories fail in these areas, but not in this case. This story is like pure alcohol, it does it's job so well there's no room for flavor.I'm early in the story, so things may change later on, but in the beginning the main character never really has time to leave an impression. He does things, and things happen, but no particular attention is given to him as a character. Because of this, I lost interest in him.