I haven't rated many books but here goes nothing.
As He/She already said, it's a typical wish fulfilling story & that's it. I personally do not like how the women is portrayed here & there are quite a few illogical points mixed in a perfectly logical scenario. Then there's the car advertisement which help me get to a bit more about cars , that's a plus point
Please update more chapters please of this book
Positive:
- Interesting premise and system
Negative:
- blind nationalism
- Bland characters
- Story rushed and poorly grounded in reality
One word that describes this novel: disappointment
I'm not changing this review until they fix this gay ass cover art. The rest of this review is just filler for the 140 character limit. Like this review if you agree!
another trash made for the sole purpose of decreasing our brain cells count sigh
I didn't see harem tag. It needs harem tag.
The writing is lacking in depth, all of it feeling rather shallow.
It's okay for casual reading.
I personally only read this when it's my 24 hour free read.
i need more chapters to review this or at least a more descriptive synopsis
i need more chapters to review this or at least a more descriptive synopsis
i need more chapters to review this or at least a more descriptive synopsis
i need more chapters to review this or at least a more descriptive synopsis
Super slow pacing that is actually a little annoying, when she gets to the shadow realm she basically stay in a cave cooking for 5 chapters.. MC seems to lack character development and the story barely moved on, I dont see any development in 50 chapter, seems like you are trying to drag things out because those 50 chapters could easily have been 20 since there is basically nothing in it, neither introduction, plot development, or character development.. Well I guess there is barely a little of friendship and such..
This novel was ABANDONED by the author because he was unhappy about the low ratings. I’m not sure why Webnovel is bothering with a book that will never be finished. Don’t waste your votes or coins on this.
Seems a bit redundant. Idk… take over the women in his family, go to next kingdom, do the same seems to be general layout. it’s not bad I guess but when you add in the fact that he won’t have to struggle or put in much effort to gain the women in his family because their love for him is 90+, I have a feeling I won’t enjoy it as much as I could have.
But for those of you looking to read something like this, where a son conquers the entire family etc, this is probably right up your alley.
One bit of advice I have for the author is to change Bro -> Brother. And don’t say bro in every sentence the little sister says.
Whether or not it’s a Chinese setting, bro in every sentence and in and of itself seems a bit off to me. Then add on the fact that it is a Chinese setting, using the word brother would definitely be the more suitable choice.
If you ever go back to edit things, I think scaling down the numbers would make it more easier to understand. Numbers in the thousands and then millions just for dealing with one session of s * x is about… yeah. You could easily get away with making everything 100* smaller and not losing out on anything.
I’ll be dropping for now. If this appears on the rankings because it’s become very popular i might pick up again. See you later, maybe.
is the novel racist? please tell me it's not.
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Author here, this is my first time writing a novel of any type. hope you all enjoy!
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