Not bad,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,, ,,, ,,
hmmp,more and keep writing for more and more chapter please.
please update your story.. I'm loving the storyline.. and waiting for annalise revenge
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I thought I'd found a hidden gem, up until it's revealed that the entire female ruling class (and potential harem members) are psychopaths who run an underground grooming gang, where they 'rescue' homeless women and **** them whenever they want. Magical contracts ensure 'loyalty', and consent doesn't seem to come into it either.Writing quality is good, update stability is very good, story up until this point was good too, but nah, this is a deal breaker for me.
As the author of this novel, I'm really excited to share this story and world with all of you. I've poured a lot of passion into crafting the characters and building the world they live in. Seriously, you guys are in for a treat. That said, as a student with a busy schedule, I might not be able to post new chapters as frequently as I'd like. But rest assured, I'll try to release as many chapters out as possible whenever I canAs for the rating; while I'm really proud of this work, I can't give it a perfect 5 stars. Well, because nothing in life is perfect! if something were truly flawless, there would be no room for improvement, and I believe there's always space to grow as a writer.Thank you for your patience and for supporting my journey as both a student and an aspiring author
It is both like a parallel universe without rebirth and like a full-fledged separate story. The main thing is not to drop this story! Too interesting!
The plot is still peak as ever, and the narration improved by a ton! bro is actually starting his villain arc today
Few authors can captivate an audience with the sheer consistency and brilliance that "Innocence" does. Delivering three chapters a day, this remarkable writer combines prolific output with exceptional quality—a rare feat in the world of serial fiction. Their novel is a delightful blend of humor, heart, and creativity, making every chapter a joy to read.
This is amazing! No seriously. I love reincarnation books, and this one is already a potential favorite for me. If you are like me and are looking for something a bit different from the typical harem reincarnation books, then this one come heavily recommended from me. The characters are are well fleshed out. The author sets a good pace for the story. The fight scenes and characters' thoughts are well detailed. The world building is pretty good as well. Fair warning, this is a fairly new book, so be prepared to wait a while for the chapters to be released. Other than that thank you very much Author for the amazing book so far. I'm really looking forward to the future of this book.
Its a great read at the start. Of course its a wish fulfillment story bit it incorporates the character very well. SpoilerWhen he gets the emperor aura or whatever his character turns for shit from sweet and cool to overly angry and domineering. Getting angry at every turn. Also author turned the novel chinese after that. Should have just kept the skill card nothing else as it messes up the story.
shameless self-review. read it!