All right this novel great writing quality. You have good updates everyday and good world background that with some mystery insides. It has good romance, story. Butbutbutbuuuuttttt.... It has worse power level development. Power level barrier. And whacky power level of MC soooooo whacky and absurd that make it nonsense and i think i will drop this novel... Seriously how can such absurd mc still alive after all that thing happen. This novel has no sense power level on mc believe me if you want good story you can pick this. but if you do just dont think of the mc strength because this ****ty brat mc it has no sense of power level and he is so weak and pathetic to the point it absurd.
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i love the way you wrote this story.it makes me want to keep on reading on and on . keep it up,this dook is a dimond.there is a lot more i want to say but im not good at describing what i think.
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Too many time wasted saying how things are amazing and beautiful instead of showing with actionsThere is too many power ups within a short amount of time.What's up with the veil wtfAlso,because of the powerups there was a need to downplay the MC a bit so magically one of the most powerful clan with very distinct features(not everyday you see people with stars in their eyes)is unknow to a young miss of a faction equal to them, so yeah the intention was there but the execution was cone very poorly.AGAIN! WHAT'S UP WITH THE VEIL?
Haha, I love your work.Try to release 2 chapters per day.Damn this 140 characters, ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Translation are coming out from mtl and Translator is not even try to put any effect on this book, fking garbage translator and I don’t even know they did they got pick by webnovel.
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Looks like this has a better translation than the other reviews indicate. Not sure if something changed since they left their reviews or what. Overall, it seems like a pretty good story. I find the MC to be really entertaining. Yes, there is a system, but I think the MC's personality so far at least makes it interesting. Same with many of the other characters especially the sect leader.
It's a slow start. But I've definitely enjoyed it so far.There is little known about how the rest of the world is doing or other people in general, Though a clear enough picture is given.
I only can tell you that Don't expect too much from this novel. Your Author is A super Noob Newbie Author with full of mistakes in Spelling and grammar along with super Short chapters That almost kill you to read you each chapter. Each chapter only contain cliffhanger with bug system that annoys us and MC in the most terrible way of possible. Each Time that this ****ty system gave something good to MC in seconds takes it back with super extras. we have here a Super Fat Pig Lazy MC that even after obtaining of System don't try change something in him at all. And Also an Author that from Writing novel and comedy Learned only cliche and cliffhanger and nothing else.Reading this 10 chapter almost killed me so i dropped this novel forever because i know there comes nothing goods out of this mental and sadist Author.Thanks Everyone for reading this Review.Vegeku