it's interesting and captivating and the story line is great
great great great great great great great great great
Its a Pancakes Whitch novel you know its gonna be good
Not going to lie, this story came out of nowhere. I enjoyed the environment the MC isn't your average edge lord, but he isn't completely sane either. A fun read so far can't wait to see where it goes.
42 chapters? Really? Go back to suck your mother's milk and then come back to write. Mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm 140 chapters
While the plot, characters and world setting sound absolutely amazing, I find it just unbearable to read. Grammar is passable, but there's 0 flow in the writing. It's like having amazing ideas but none of the skills to execute them.Random conversations happen that have no relation to the current scene (or maybe just added as an afterthought by the author? that's supposed to give a little bit of insight to character quirks? unfortunately, it's done so badly...)I have a HUGE problem with the pacing and flow of the story (at 6!!! chapters!!!) so while the story really, genuinely sounds interesting, I just can't pick it up. ( T T )Disclaimer: I'm not that good at English myself, but I'm a very picky reader. It's just how I feel (shrug)
author pleasssseeee open more chapters we are curious about the story limited five chapters is very low I used my FP PASS to open a extra chapter.I do not have money to open the other chapters please take us into consideration
I didn't read the story yet . I'm wondering what +18 mean!! Like describing a s*x scene or is for gore?? Because if it is gore i will be interested in reading it otherwise not my type
The author have the good descriptive of words, reading this remind me of my brother that likes to stream. Game streamers would relate to this. If you are into video games, give this a try!
LOABA spends far too much time in the inkstone discord. Imagine how many chapters per day he could write if he didn't waste all his time there. You should read this web serial and let LOABA know with a comment on every chapter to spend less time derping and more time writing. Thank you. Skully out.
Since this is new and i kinda like the synopsis, i'll rate it as 3 stars ( neutral ). I'm expecting a good novel. Hope i won't be disappointed.
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