Development is just too slow and things take too long to build up Mc doesn't give the feel as someone's ancestor.It gives you a disconnect since mc is much older than them.My expectation also took a nose dive when 3 girls were introduced. Grand daughters understandable but the thief girl is just boring.And why does the author make the Cecil family retards at least one of his grand daughters should be smart but they feel like retards.
Can someone explain the cultivation levels,author says 3 mortal earths 3 heavens 3 xiantian skies,in the chapter we see 0-10 levels then 1 grade ,i dont understand anything,author failed badly at explaining the cultivation levels in the novels.The note at the begining with cultivation levels should contain detailed explanation for reference,but in the first chapters all novels shoul;d have cultivation ranks introduced,author failed badly at it.
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It was a long and interesting story, the last part was a bit off but overall it was one of the best novel I have ever read, thank you for your hard work to write this amazing novel, THANKS FROM HEART.
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it's hella good. kinda of stale in the beginning. but picked up pretty fast. it was enjoyable. kind of corny ending. but overall peak
Q&A *What is this story all about?—This is a story that focuses on World Building and Character Development. We shall learn about the world of Shannia from Kai's journey which will develop his character over time. *Is this Harem?—Yes and No. Kai, the MC does not like the idea of harems. On the other hand, Zuriel, Kai's OP sidekick is a total delinquent that collects girls as if he's hunting pokemon. *What kind of Character is the MC?—Kai is just a normal guy in general but is a cripple in real-life. The game of Shannia gave him a chance to walk. His intelligence is average as well as his overall personality. In short, he's boring? I think not. I made Kai brave and inspiring. He's a plain guy on the outside but has a burning passion inside of him to carry on with his life. I hope you'll love him the way I do. *Does this book do Mass Releases?—Yes. I do mass releases every end of the month. The number of chapters released will be based on the condition of the set goals for the month. I usually do a 5-chapter release per day. For the details of the goals, please check the synopsis. Thank you.
Seldomly have i read a story with a worse MC than this. He's retarded. During this first 8 chapters of this story nothing of interest happens and you're getting fludded with the idiocy of this mc.There is nothing appealing so far, I will continue till chapter 20 and maybe update this review.