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Luke/Night's character is pretty relatable. The way the story prolongs is at a good pace and as a novice writer, the concept and the arc of the story is very fascinating.
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Miss this one a lot. One of my favorites. I hope someone can translate it, cuz i know there are mtl's of a bunch more chaps...
No, I'm not shameless. It is only shameless if it is not true and I dare say that if you know what you came for, my novel will provide you with entertainment and delightful surprises. Thus, I give myself five stars.(But really I'm just another shameless author giving himself five stars to boost his overall rating *yikes*)
the best ever it's been so long to read a good story like this
Yes I always like pay for some half-a..ed MTL translationFirst 40 chapters are good then recently translated chapters are MTL and you need to pay to unlock :) greed at its finest
Brutal honest review here. This is original, a story about gene awakened by MC which is if it achieve the highest rank, MC will attained Sun Wukong gene. Unfortunately, there are 3 tags of the novel that I try to avoid which are yaoi, netorare and racism, where racism applied in this novel. Too much plot holes and fillers. The only good in this novel were the translator who never fail to update everyday and the translator too who don't take offense whenever readers curse at this novel. Thanks TL, but for this novel.. I give up
The novel's ok, well there's not much depth and the thinking of various characters is quite shallow (for these princes, generals, sect elders, reincarnator and others you'd expect much more complicated thoughts and focuses) but at least it isn't as bad as in these some "i am evil" novels. Also the novel somewhat reminds me of 'invincible Uncle Grandmaster' novel, albeit Uncle Grandmaster was much more chill, had better conversations, good comedy and included character growth/development even at the late chapters of the novel, at the same time being a one-punch-man where fights never lasted long. As for this one, well i doubt there will be any character development, but it's ok, there are no complicated processes and info dumps, it's for those who like "shocked expressions" of people that surround MC.
Lot of chapter ... that's about it.One of the worst translation i ever seen. There is a mistake e v e r y paragraph, and i'm not talking about orthograph, we are talking about missing negation, wrong word, confusion on his own strenght realms...Last one i have seen was confusing 'prison' and 'poison'... I wouldn't have guessed if not for the comments.
Author reposts chapters to get inflated release numbers, good story but ruined by obvious abuse by author, who will repost old chapters to get paid, and inflated their release rate, disappointing to see a new release and be asked to unlock with points then find out its just author posting one of his fake chapters.
The constant mix of present tense and past tense is reallly realllllly annoying. And after reading like 4 chaps, I still don't know if you intended to write things in present tense or past tense. Other than that, there's not much to badmouth regarding grammar. As for WOrld and character design, they're very very interesting. Everything's explained in a quick, no-nonsense manner, and you can see the characters' personalities oozing out from the pages.Some passages read in a bit of an exaggerated manner to emphasize plot points and character traits, but it's nothing too overbearing.As for story dev, I rly can't say much at this point in the novel
This novel .... the grammer and writing style... just *Muah* and 7 out of 5.Additionally, the story development and physiological insight on Protagonist's thinking have surpassed most of the Web novels here if not all.Even though the concept is somewhat clitche but it's totally understandable considering the colossal amount of effort it takes to think and weave a new idea in a story. However it always comes down to how the writer presents and ...oh boy... it definitely is one of the best.Especially so for the story development which is not forced to follow the clitche and give a very unique taste especially so considering that we have come here and have seen the 'tags'.THE TAGS, Very self explanatory indeed.Overall, a diamond in coal mine. A Koh-a-noor at that.Definitely recommend giving it a go but be sure to read to 'tags' beforehand considering some people tend to be less 'open' to these 'themes'.
