havent even read the story i alr know it's peak fiction. i cant wait for when the mc rams his truck into the antagonist and for the powerscalers to lose their minds
This story about a person that wanted to speed up the technology development, hoping to experience VR-MMORPG in his lifetime.However so far, instead of progressing the technology development, it's much more a slice of life story, not that I complain. I enjoyed the character development.Anyway, this story so far is a slow-burner type, it'll take a while to end if the author decided to create an event every single day.If you like slice-of-life story, with possibly interesting development, I recommend this story to you.
I Genuinely love the concept behind the storyy and the world. Very interesting and unique I am sold. stumbled upon this last night and I am already drawn in? Great work!
Shit ending. Good up till that point. MC had the whole "I'm hiding and someone slightly irked me, so obviously I'll make a huge scene" mentality, which was irksome. Then the story ends utterly without cause or preamble. Made sense in a more way, but it also proved the genius MC was a moron.
I didn't really know what to expect cause this is my first action book. But the writer kept me captured and looking forward to the next chapter!!! I am so excited. P.S EDWARD MUST DIE!!!
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Writing Quality 5/5 There are a few grammar mistakes but not enough to break the 'immersion', it is overall entertaining and immersive.Story Development 4/5 There has been one red flag but it is so far good Character Design 4/5Updating Stability 3/5 One chapter a few is simply not enough for the readers and for the book to grow World Background 4/5Story Development 4/5
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Overall it is ok. Honestly it is not a my cup of tea since I'm stopping at around chapter 38. It's not bad and there is some fun in it since it looks like his future job will be entertaining for us. The author is quite witty and engages with the commentators quite a bit... I always like that honestly.spoilers... maybe: ? (Just for the first maybe 20ish chapters)The book begins kinda slow if you ask me, with some misunderstandings between the characters that get ironed out quite quickly. I don't really like the MC... if he was a bit more logical he would be able to deduce some stuff but he isn't really. He is quite emotional and a bit of a wuss... but honestly he is not a bad guy or a character that you would hate for whom he is. It does annoy me that if he just talked... like in any other good shotgun relationship things would all pan out lol.The girl is not really cold. She just puts up a front, and she is as soft as a muffin inside and does care for the MC from what I could see quite a bit. I cant say that I wouldn't be scared in some of those situations... but I would be quite a bit more chill lol. Welp good luck with your book.
It’s is a great story if it wasn’t for the updating stabili