This story is very interesting so far. The main character is smart, but not a genius, which is nice because she’s imperfect so there’s room for character growth. There isn’t a lot of information about the other characters yet so I’m hoping we’ll get to know them. Also I really liked how parts of her dream were written in code.
Very confusing, and hard to follow. I tried very hard to enjoy what I was reading but...there's too much not explained or brushed over to really feel the story
I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story! This kind of genre usually hooks me, and you're nailing it. Keep up the fantastic work!
Writing is good, nice and interesting plots, in chapter 3 and can't stop reading. Good Job here author
Estou gostando muito da história o primeiro capítulo eu normalmente droapa mais quando eu vi que o segundo foi literalmente de 0 a 100 muito rápido eu decidi continuar e agora estou viciado e todo dia espero lançar novo capitulo
Very interesting read. Well done author for a refreshing and original work! The author writes well and has great story telling skills. A great read overall.
Nice Story, character, updating and world Background -
Finally!A satisfying Fan-fic , Even I think that Naruto is clearly brainwashed by Third. Not to mention he never really reached his full potential ,Even during the Timeskip between Naruto and shippuden , all he mastered were shadow clone and Rasengan. He got the brute force of his upgraded again and again.
Uzumaki Chakra+ Senjutsu chakra+ Nine tails chakra + Sos paths chakra . All of these made his chakra potent and lethal.
Not to mention he never really realised he was brainwashed about the village even after he learnt who his parents were.
And I read your Fan-fic about Sasuke and yeah , I too share the same view , Though I also have other idea like I always wondered what would happen if Sasuke completely forgot about Itachi.
such good novel but so little support,
if you could read pass 120chapter, you will find this novel outstanding, the only minus is the translator so fkg lazy with updates
This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top.
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