Short but worth the read
Great potential for the novel, love the story.
Haaah anyone remember those good ole days where reading novels was free?
I mean it's more convenient for the novels to all be on this website but it just disgust me how they are blatantly using our addiction to make profits.....haah might as well go back to my heroin addiction.
As for the novel review it's pretty much the anime big three of the novel world. Good story, but has got a lot of fillers.
Hello all authors. Please stop writing children protagonists into stories clearly designed for adult leads (or at the very least somewhat adult-late teens). Anime and japanese light novels influenced and ruined an entire generation of what could have been amazing writers. At no point does it make sense in this novel, nor in 99% of other CP novels. Ruins the entire reading expericence and decimates any form of immersion.
This novel is terrible, the main character is nothing but a boot-licker, who chases after women. He thinks he is manipulative but is nothing more than a dog. The novel is 90% of boring conversation. I am dropping this novel.
Best Cultivation Romance I have read to this day.
The story is completed within 600 chapters delivering a whole story without dragging on. It's a rare thing in my opinion that a webnovel author has a vision for his novel and brings it to a good completed ending.
if u have nothing to read then I guess u could read this to pass some time or relieve your boredom
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing. Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat. Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities.
So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish. I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.
An action packed story about a more disturbed version of batman without the gadgets, so far, but willing to kill like an ice cold assasin. No hessitation to kill, must of been a lovely guy in his past life or already beleived he was his character like a real keyboard warrior, wasnt explained how old he was in past life but i guess either 8 years old living in mental hospital or a 45 year old mafia hitman
y mass release without letting us know,
and so y make that premium, u fucking asshole
of all the things you could have done is to tell us that you were going to go premium, and we would know to drop this book, before and not make us want to read any of your 12 SS chapters
Overall a very enjoyable plot and idea. It feels like a very free RPG and I like the idea of that. I can envision the world well and the story progresses at a reasonable pace.
The writing can be a bit sloppy at times, but I think the other aspects makes up for it.
Overall, the quality of the first half of the currently released chapters have been bad. Holding my interest for the first 4 chapters, the quality has dropped faster than a rock would sink in a pool of water. Quite unlikely that I will take it up again since I have finally started to develop eye fatigue or computer vision syndrome...