First time writing a review here but i really loved your story. Every chapter has me craving for more. The world buildings and characters all are well developed and system also doesn't make him ridiculously op so that is also what I like.
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but i would like to ask a question. If this is a harem story or not. I don't really like stories with harem much cuz they start getting rediculous with every girl trying to get mc.
But could you tell if there would be any heartbreak moments (i don't like those scenes in novels) for Em and Leah as they have shown obvious interest in him. Though i will follow your story whatever the answer.
Honestly I love this novel and I think there should be even more. My boss caught me reading this at work and yelled at me but after I told him what novel he was he even gave me a break to continue
good novel, I really enjoyed reading it until the middle of the chapter, unfortunately the recent chapter is too dark, having to get down from my library. thank you, goodbye and good luck ^ _ ^
Author here!~
This novel will be hentai intended so be careful, although its not every chapter but it would sometimes appear so KIDS begone from here!~
I didn't give full 5 star since although I have confidence on my own writing, it wouldn't be same in other eyes (you! yeah you!).
Its not like I'm genius in English, so I'm taking full minus star for this flaw as my motivation to improve though I doubt that no one will pick it since I'm sure cliche review will appear about it.
didn't gave review in a long time about the story it's very good other than making the mc rely on the system but it's just happens on the starting arc's and and leaving the mc and people related to himall are chicl'e typical xianxia type.overall the story is to my liking i don't know about the others.
I don't like reading long chapters but I was suprise I didn't get bored reading yours. Good character design and the world background got me hooked. Let's go transform into bats.
What to say about this author
The author knows how to describe its character just a little bit of grammar mistakes but I am a carefree reader. I just enjoy the story and go along with it. So if you are looking for war & military fiction you should read this one. I know it's like 2 or three chapters now but the author has worked up really to rewrite the story on the basis of people's critique.
So, keep up the good work dear author.
The story is fast paced and skips over the unnecessary details. Overall, despite it being the stereotypical martial arts story, it was a pleasant read and I recommend it.
nice read, I have to say love the nonchalant mc and to say the least it's a nice work in all honesty better than I expected, keep up the good work we're backing you up
Your author here sorry I have been in school for the past few months and was focused entirely in my thesis, but I am hoping to finish this series my grammar isn't really good when it comes to those love scene but I hope you like it.
Pure trash no matter how you look at it. Even if you can look past the poor translation and the over use of idioms the MC is about as consistent as Rick James on coke. "I want to keep a low profile" and immediately gets involved with a piece of sheet (grapist and lair by disregarding the deal made just the day before) that somehow he befriends on some Chinese level logic.
Being forced by Master Rabbink to promote my own story!!!
Master Rabbink, this will get me some female fans, right? Hahaha.
What is this review should not be less than 140 characters? There is only 1 character needed. The number 1 young master from Bluestar. Yours truly Trevon McArthur.