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??? I lost my mind reading this. When I read it, it sounds like a robot. It doesnt fit very well and also grammar and punctuation are terrible. Coming from England these are vital for me to read it. This story doesnt have any at all. (Not the worst I've read though...)

The story has a pretty good start. I can't say much as I only made a review after the first chapter. I just thought giving a high rating would motivate the author and gather more readers. It seems like it can turn into an interesting story so I say the author should continue with it