The story progression is good. Give it a try. I think most of the fantasy lovers will like the way it progresses.
Charecter development is good, but slow wirtinga nd progression speed. Please increase it.
Haven't actually started reading this book I'm going to wait for it to get at least 20 something chapters however that's not the sounds really interesting I can't wait to check it out
The basic idea is a lot of fun. Still, there is way too much wish fulfillment going on here. The main character is overpowered from the start, yet it is mostly based on a ring that can be stolen by anyone.In addition, the main character starts out with a broken back and has just woken up from a coma. Yet, when she appears later to talk to her dad in his office, he just is happy to see her and agrees to let her fight his bodyguards.Between the character being too overpowered and the rest of the world being in a mental la-la land, I just can't get into this story.
Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
I love the story so far I just hope the mc doesnt start going soft now that he has a daughter and tries to please everyone instead of just killing I also hope he continues to slaughter his way to the apex :D
I like how the MC is a cautious person and likes to study.
One of better original novels on the site. It 's been a good story so far and just starting to get interesting. As always hoping for more regular updates to keep up the interest.
Really great job, keep up, and hope you can write more chapters, good luck and many thanks for your hard working, hope you canna continue writing on this novels and realise many other chapters, bye.
This novel honestly is a breath of fresh air among all the copy pasta. Here's to hoping it will be picked up ????????
hello, it's me again, please read because this is an amazingly great novel that I highly recommend if you know what I mean. *smirks* huhuhuhuhu
Found this series by chance and i just love it! I like the plot (good personal revenge novels are hard to find) and characters seem quite nice at the moment (exept that whiny girl) Hope it will update more often.