Ah, such a beautiful story. Ahem. Sorry, got caught up with my worshipping. In any case, the writing quality is pretty good, thanks to the editor. There are still a few places in which grammer needs to be checked over though(but this is natural. Humans can't make everything perfect). Stability of Updates...hmm...for the most part, the updates are coming really well, just a few times couldn't meet the deadline(haha, better than good ol'sloth me) Everything else is just perfect! The way characters never appear the way they do, the growth of the children, and of course, our MC. It was hilarious reading the interaction of a plant and the demonic bull. XDXD I think the world background is great, and it actually sounds realistic, not just some bullcrud stuff being thrown at you. I find it is extremely easy to be hooked. I swear, it sounds just like those best-selling books. here I'm gonna boast my insignificant boast. I PUT IN THE 100TH POWERSTONE. SO PROUD OF MYSELF :D:D:D:D:D And that's about it. time to go back in my worship mode~
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Thanks for the updates consistency really like that, going to see if this lives to the hype...don’t disappoint me...***+*****+*********+*********+*****+****+*****+******+
interesting one sweetie keep it up and thanks for the update you have been so good at what you are doing so keep it up and thanks for the update ok
Around chp 200 and so the MC is so fking stupid. They have bikes, more than enough food, guns and superpowers yet they still fking follow other victims, just to get caught by the Lee corporation and become a member of their army? What fking stupid shit is this. They have nothing to write so they just add in fillers. You might say this is a turning point of the story, but it's written in a fking idiotic and stupid way. Fk this stupid story. Don't read. It'll make you go crazy of how stupid the MC is.
now Ryan how does it feel? im loving how Ryan got so jealous...hurray!
Such a captivating and interesting story. good job dear author ...
the strory is amazing i can't for the physical book
interesting
I'm really enjoying this book, tried to find you on ig but couldn't Moonlight Muse.
oml, I'm loving the book. thank you for the good read and I'll try and wait patiently for the new chapters
This book is something else, love it sooo much