Recently, I have seen many movies about death games like 'Escape Room' and 'Squid Game', and so on, and this novel is really good if you are a fan of mystery and thriller in my opinion. And the male protagonist, Shade, is quite realistic to be honest and it honestly surprised me when he helped the old man though at first he was quite adamant on not helping the old man.
Moreover, the grammer of this book is really good!
All in one, this is a amazing novel for you to read :)
Keep up the good work Author-Sama!
This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
So far the author has done a good job with the book. The writing style and flow have no errors within them. While the book may be about cultivation which has become a somewhat bland category, the author offers a unique concept to this genre with this book. If done right it could end up as a great novel, and so far it has been good.
Overall a very basic but good realistic story, it has some weird parts starting on chapter six where lines of code can be seen, I assume the author tried to add photos to the work but it failed. Other than that small and annoying problem to read around. Its a good story and if you have time and are looking for something to read, you might as well give this one a shot.
You just made me love stories that are woven like old Legends, the plot is deep and branching I love the character descriptions and the world setting has absolutely dope divinity, Karl Tian is already my fav, great job so far got me super curious into what's gonna happen next!
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I've just finished reading the most recent chapter, and I must say that it's an intriguing novel. I also really like the characters and the setting of the islands. I hope the author can keep up.
I'll grant that the previous chapters weren't as strong, but you shouldn't evaluate a book by its first few chapters. I hope any new readers will give the book a shot. The desert arc is where I really started to enjoy it.
This novel is not my type anymore I don't like it, I can see where this novel goes a demonic hero who helps innocent girls and the author continually repeats how irene is an immeasurable beauty that can even seduce the sky
idk but the story is too fast, the system is so confusing and not too detail about the skill. psychologically speaking I think you disregard the parent condition coz a three years old is missing, i know they know that their child is in his master but you destroy the relationship between parent and child psychologically speaking. the story is already a mess and the plot is straight forward without twist. at early story you made him almost godlike.
Translated Chinese fanfic, expect the usual stuff.
The beginning is really interesting and the world of the novel is unique, also the author clearly know where the story is going. Can't wait for new chapters.Keep up.