Really fun read with enjoyable characters. The story is also really compelling with a bit of a twist on the typical transmigration trope.
This book is so friggin interesting....why am I just seeing it now, lol..I read the first chapter and I got hooked, thanks for the work author..
Really enjoying the rewrite of A Desolate Life so far. Can’t wait to catch up to existing chapters. Really encourage people to give this novel a shot.
MC is almost completely braindead. He could have solved every problem he has simply by cultivating at home for a couple weeks instead of immediately throwing himself into a lawless area full of strong people.
Bad mc attitude. Very arrogant
King: “Can you really help us?” Tries to clarify if the legends are true and if he’s really worth it.
Mc: “Wtf man, I just need all this stuff and I’ll solve your problems ok?” Doesn’t provide any info at all and leaves once the king showed hesitation.
Hello everyone!
This novel has some major flaws. In my opinion, the greatest flaw is unrealistic gamers and lots of small flaws due to that.
List of core flaws:
1) I would like to notice that gamers are not playing closed beta. Closed beta is a paid job where people are testing everything to find bugs. Closed beta testers can not post anything or disclose any information. We can let it slide thou, there are different companies out there. Untested game capsules from unknown game company... aren't it insanely suspicious?
2) In this novel people are complaining about bugs which is quite strange. For example WOW has bugs after each new update (since vanilla till BFA ^^ ), which is common for such huge game, and people are complaining and insult developers *in beta* ... aren't it absurd? Same for servers maintance.
3) People are not worried about lack of feedback and support mechanisms (again it is BETA testing!)
4) People are offering money for in game currency.
4.1) Looking at insane prices, real testers would have submited a report and wait while all prices would have been reduced (like in most betas).
4.2) In all betas that I know, all beta progress stays in beta, and real game is real game.
4.3) It is BETA, you do not play it, you test a game.
5) It is BETA testing! Developers ask for beta testing, not players. Most gamers can not play for more then 2 hours per day, and even those who can, usually refuse to play unrefined games. So thousands beta requests is kinda...
Basic minor flaws are from biology. Let us take for granted that goblin is equal in strenght to a common human male. If human mine ore, excavate stone, cut something, etc he get bruises and small cuts. Without gloves even tough skinned man can not really mine or drag something without inflicting self damage. And now let us remember that tools are rude and have no handle... So goblins are tough as hell (more like made from steel ^^ ) or Demon Lord heals them every 2-3 hours (or they will just bleed to death).
I can continue, but this review is already far too long.
Thank you for your time and have a great day!
It is funny how i am yet to read this book. Hopefully it is lovely, love it cover as well, and i would love to start now ...so thanks for the chapters...
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lovely story with a lot of potential.can't wait for the slimes to become stronger and for the mc to realise that this is more than a game..
Great. I don’t have much to say since I don’t particularly like this genre but the horror was abysmal to say. I know it’s quite non-existent in the first 60 chapters, but the detail is quite expressive. The only thing I find great imo is the character design. It’s impressive.
This is actually sad. This was one of the novels I was excited for but it's way too rushed. Story is basically random. So disappointing????
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