hello author-san, I am a new reader of your work... despite all of the hate comments, I am gonna read your work. well.... everyone has a bad day and I had the worst so how bad it can be.. right??
If I had to describe this novel in one word, it would be 'alright'. The overall plot of the novel is interesting. It certainly isn't new, but I'm not one to hope every novel I read is a brand new, genius idea. The grammar is off in places, but its isn't unreadable.My main gripe would be the character interactions. It was only 4 chapters in when we ran into our first 'arrogant young master' character, and much of the 15 chapters I read was just recycling some variation of "FL is way too beautiful and amazing," "ML is useless and plain and doesn't belong with her." The MC somehow gets a subpar score on the entrance exam (what was on the test still hasn't been explained), but has overwhelming power than expected for his age. There's a blatant disregard for any female's opinions (no matter their school rank or personal power). And bot the ML and FL are content to get walked all over so that they can 'live peacefully as a couple' while doing nothing preventative to help ensure that future. I'm sure at some point the ML is going to show off his power in a ridiculous way, and then everyone will fawn over him at that time. It's all of the usual things you would find in an average xanxia novel. I think it's done a bit excessively in this novel, hence the low rating. It becomes a bit of a slog to read through
First: I have to say that I'm glad author-san used reincarnation instead of body theft of those so called righteous transmigrators. As a cultivator myself who reincarnated in this mortal world, I'm happy that author-san know how blasphemous the act of body theft is.Second: This novel remember me of History Strongest Senior Brother, where the mc is the so called Young Master, the mid or final boss from the lower realms. It's good to see this approach because this make the mc strong from the start and we don't have to swallow the inumerable luck encounters that mc with poor background need to reach the same height that a Young Master.Third: I hope there are many "protagonists" to appear in the novel against our mc even in the Immortal Realm (if there one or similar in the future). Because what we want to see a Young Master doing is slaping arrogant protagonists! (how in the world the mortals of this world can like arrogants protagonists without a background and only because they are transmigrators/reinccarnators/got a great luck encounter is out of my compreension and maybe a hidden dao of the heavens).4th: Her senior sister is a yandere? I hope not.5th: Author-sam, o you tought about using a "female protagonist" as a enemy to the mc? Or if mc can befriend some more moderate "protagonist"? (Arrogant "protagonist" don't need mercy)6th: Amazing novel, I'll try to vote the power stones in this novel every day o/
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I thought this would only on scribblehub but when I check your account novel I found this so because I'm bored I give you review
Trash story. Save yourself some time and skip this. The first 60 chapters were alright but it all went downhill. We thought that the Mc would be low-key but nope. He just suddenly one day reveal his identity bc he simp for his junior sis and his junior sis doesn't even seem bothered with it bc you know, 2-dimensional characters are all this author can write. Mc seems so strong yet so weak. He learns so many powers but doesn't even use all of them. Garbo novel, dont get baited by this author just bc the beginning was good.
Mc is powerful and smart the romance in the story is good and not too slow. there only thing lacking is grammar but it can be understand.....
This story is not complete at all. It's different from the synopsis. No elf, no sorcerer, no vampire prince, no orc saint, no gargantuan dragon...ahhh...i'm disapointed
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bro you got errors in your synopsis... fix that before you continue making a story....................................................mmmmmmmm
I've been waiting for this kind of story! Hurry up and vote, and if you know the raw, please post a link!
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