Hi, I love your story title, your book cover is super good, and the plot of your story is amazing and strong too. I'm addicted, I hope you complete your story. Best of luck.
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
Expedited turn of events to the point that we are not given time to sympathize with the MC when he does stupid sh*t. Rather than feeling that his actions were justified, it feels like explanations were glossed over and his actions become crude and immoral. I have no clue if it's the translation or it's created by design, but so far I'm not invested or impressed. Verdict: Pass.
I like the story very much. I'm also very intrigued about why Song Tian's eyes become golden and almost everyone has a system or it's going to inherit one. I hope the story continued to by so interesting.
The world is a mix of cultivation and fantasy elements.
System and cultivation, who doesn't like them, the author has used the System as a good input in the cultivation system.
In this world the mc is not the only one with the system, the system does not make anyone op, it just makes all standard.
The MC is only a human who took advantage of the early bonuses, becoming a bit stronger than all others.
He constantly works hard to become stronger and is not exactly a weak-a*s, as he uses his wits to survive more, different from many MC that rely on Luck and power eruptions to survive, this one at least tries.
And the part about the half-slime half-man status of his, it is shown that some de merits have been applied to him instead of just merits.
So far they are few chapters (9) but it is very interesting and funny, Jane is not OP but she is strong and I hope she gains more strength in the course of history.
I love the chosen gender !!
great story one of the top 10 in my book. keep going with this story! i will keep reading it!...................................................
Hey author, I'm sure that this story is definately not a remake of 'Ill add points to everything' is ? Cause the system is the exact same, so yeah....
It's a masterpiece.
Really don't know why so many people are giving such a low rating just because of one vaguely racist comment, which had already been removed from the story. I wonder if some of these people had actually read the story before they reviewed or liked the reviews saying that this novel is racist and decided to ditch the novel.Personally, I feel this is an interesting read. I could see a lot of potential in the story and character development, and I really like the comedic way the story is delivered. I feel that this book is much better than some other books that get selected and I really hope to see what happens next in the novel.
Its good. If you see this you should read it. Also the author is a great person so if you ask a question he will reply. Anyway you should read.