This is such an interesting book! I love isekai and this one has a unique spin to it which differs it from the typical ones and is fleshed out well. Good job author ❤️.
The grammar and typos make this a slightly annoying read. The nicknames are cringe. The FL isn’t really my cup of tea in terms of her behavior. Admittedly, I did drop this book early because I was just unable to get into it, so I don’t know if the story gets better.
I love this story one of if not the best Warhammer story here so pls update soon other than that eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Wow, this is really really interesting and the novel's description was really good. ????First I thought the novel was boy getting rich and playing with girls but this novel he is loyal to his wife❤❤
If anyone knows or finds the raws for this please let me know I have searched to no avail maybe I’m just to stupid for it so need help.
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One Word for this book? GORGEOUSMan author knows how to entice a fujoshi like myself into reading another chapter, and one more and one more and another----the only thing the author did wrong was not updating more. I NEED MORE! First chapter was intense, and when i said intense i meant it--- I was hooked with Hiro and Jin, and it was just the first chapter! Would love to see more---so come on chop chop updateeee!
If you're reading this I suggest you stop because there is too much bad points in the story.
• MC is dumb and not your genius or normal mc type, he doesn't try to think for himself but only ask the system to solve every bit of his problems (like literally for everything, I wont lie just read and be disappointed).
• MC chooses a very weak body and unsuitable for cultivation and complains every time when other people make breakthroughs, he complains that his body is to weak and its unfair, and says why can't he have that body that can cultivate fast. Furthermore it worsens because of the fact that he can create a super body that is very op.
• MC is not insightful, in just a year he could accumulate hundreds of billions of energy to create a super op body for cultivation that can reach godhood fast but instead he says that he should struggle by himself cause it would be no fun and chooses his very weak body, in the end he spent a few years adapting to qi and increasing his realm in qi condensation, which is very dumb.
• This is a novel with a very op system but makes the mc dumb and dependent on everything to make the story longer and give the author money.
• Truly bad, you can't be expecting from this, now the novel is already declining with only 3 chapters per week because the readers have long abandoned it 1-100 chapters. If you read this, you'll be infuriated by the dumb logic and long wait for the author to release the chapters.
• As I see it this novel will get 2 out of 5 from me.
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The best thing from this novel is the hilarious narration. Author does it so well that the writing and pace managed to pull me in the world. Everything seems vivid then. Everything is happening. And my stomach is still sore from all that laughing .
The second best thing, woman.
Writing Quality: 4 Stars
The Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh...
English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels.
The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good.
Stability of Update: 2 Stars
Writing novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity.
Story Development: 5 Stars
The pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady.
The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base.
Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important.
Character Design: 5 Stars
The main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon.
The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples.
Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people.
Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies.
For more information, you can read it yourself...
World Background: 5 Stars
The Author said, "It was good... I think."
honestly a fun story to read keep up the good work. I can't wait to see how much the story develops. ....,..................................