it is pretty interesting. I recommend It greatly.
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Really good FF!
Sadly, it's dropped, but still worth to read!
MC is an interesting character, not like some we, readers, are used to so I think that everyone should enjoy reading this!
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Great potential.. keep it up!!!..
the plot story of the beast who not different from human.. gave us.. a special taste in this story..
Waiting for another chapter.. wish you could keep the great work..
perfect blend of action adn romance
love the story so far
the narration is THE perfect
keep it up author gonna wait for more chaps and stock them up to read later
Hmm interesting, I'll come back to this review once I'm finished, I'm looking forward to it!
I am hooked on this story. I love things like this and absolutely cannot wait for more of this to be read by me in the future. I hope you will update a lot
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Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.
Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.
Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.
Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.
World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?
Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
Mc is 10000% narcissist and doesn't care for favors. He is arrogant and shameless. Now he got is super cheat, the character development is not looking good .I am dropping this because of Mc not of world development or chiche.
Read three chapters and I can't continue. It's just trash. Characters are stereotypical af, sentences make no sense, story is alright, but generic as usual. The MC has a "cute sparrow