Nana_Smithh
Nice start with a suspense
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I think it looks interesting. Please update more chapters so that we can judge it accordingly.
Alright first review from a lvl 15!overall the book is very enjoyable. The author knows how to hook the reader into wanting more. He knows how to describe a lot of things in details. The plot and world building is actually good. The cliffhangers will end up making us wanna fight the author.Here will be some spoilers and criticism.Do not read this if you don’t wanna be spoiled.Sometimes you mix up the povs of who is fighting. In one of the fight where belain was fighting you switch to Mika name instead of belain.(I probably spelt his name wrong) The pacing of the story could use some work. The mc has a little over a year left to live but still struggles against students. He won against Ophelia but lost to Xander and struggled against the disciplinary committe. Granted he was exhausted and other factors came into play. I still think he should’ve put a way better fight considering he won against Ophelia and the demons and survived against Olivia.The romance with the teacher caught me off guard. When we things progressive future more into their relationship? Will it be a harem with the other members?
I really liked it so far, even though the grammar is messy but still bearable waiting for the next chapter
Let's get this going. Naruto to MHA is a really good fanfic with lots of potential. Keep up the good work and please dont drop it. Thanks and goodluck
Their is no overarching plot as of now. Characters are very 2 dimensional. The world development is decent but nothing to write home about. In fact i am giving it a decent rating as the way it is being unveiled it seems promising but at 40 chapters i can't say for sure. But the story flows quite smoothly and the writing is decent. I rather prefer these type of novels despite the lack of originality because they don't have a problem with their pacing and flows unlike most of original novels.
Definitely the better of the authors too stories, as a CEO and the hero of my own story this novel really speaks to me on an intellectual level. By boiling women down into their essence of which route they will take to accept my advances it just makes everything so much more real and true to life.
The reincarnation hook makes it feel special, and giving our main character the cheat of the system feels morally justified. Keep writing Author Buella sans sama onikai tamagotchi!
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I haven't seen a novel where the main lead actually do something massive to help the MC. And I hope that this is one of them. [img=fp][img=recommend]
This is a really good story and I couldn’t get enough of it when it was being released, which is why I’m super disappointed that it wasn’t updated/dropped.
Please update/bring this back.
(I don’t actually know whether this was dropped or not, thats why I used slashes.)
