Based on the premise, this kind of stories shouldn't even be translated.One more story which is only an excuse for MC to do lewd stuff with objectified women.
I think that this novel is starting off very nicely and if the author continues to develop the novel it will do really well.?Hope u can keep up this quality of writing and rate of releasing and lastly wish u all the best ???
Good novel+ for World Background( The author created a believable world that I hope gets even better as the story progresses, the idea of a magic system is at best mediocre, but it is getting a big plus for the consistency which is no small feat and the author can be quite proud of it.)- for Character Design( The protagonist is not that bad. I personally liked that you tried to give him some depth, but in the end he is like a bad side character, we know almost nothing about him and most of the character traits you tried to give him get forgotten after 5 chapters.The side characters are all just not good , we have no rival , an antagonist that just appears in the middle of the story and a love interest that couldnt be more unimportant.For real if I had to decide if the love interest or that random weaponsmith had to die , well you know who I would choose.)I can also see that you improve yourself with every chapter written, the second arc is way better then the first and I really think you got talent. Keep writing.
Dont judge or insult me, and I wont judge or insult you.I'm here for both the plot and incest tag.The idea of Demi-God Protagonist who desires revange against douch-bag Zeus, his own father.And the idea that MC will actually against Olympian Gods is interesting.
Will wait until 50+ chaps before Reviewing. Main concern for me is update stability but well see. Seems pretty pog so far. Soooooo, keep it up!
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The cover is great and it represents the story of the game. The dying star Betelgeuse. I never know about it until I read it here. The game is really interesting, and I like how the MC has the upper hand over the other players. I love it!
I was wondering why it seemed familiar to me the names were just changed, read this story 2 years ago called league of legends undefeatable..
I will say this story is good.I definitely suggest new reader to read it.it is one of the best video game novel out there(among recently released video game novel)old readers will enjoy it tooI hope it get picked.. not those which garbage Novel like before.
The author is a native English speaker based on his profile. So, my review of this webnovel is going to be more in line with that expectation and not the typical translation trash that litters this website. Writing Quality- There's a few grammar mistakes but nothing too serious. Story Development- For a while there the MC has some cultivation level dialogue going on and some typical thot in distress. But, the biggest issue this webnovel has is the set up itself. Presently the MC is playing a beta test version of the game and it's been 70+ chapters. Like a normal person would think, once the beta ends all the data is going to be wiped. So that means almost the entirety of the story written until then is going to be a waste unless some BS story development occurs to change common sense. Then we either have to deal with watching the MC rebuild his religion as some Nordic god again or deciding to be something else. Character Design- There's some cultivation type characters which is pretty low brow everything considered. Updating Stability- Consistent or maybe not? As a guy who's written 400+ chapters he spends an inordinate amount of time DCMA-ING bots that copy and paste his chapters onto other websites. Even threatens us the readers and not the bots he'll stop writing if the pirating doesn't stop. World Background- It's fine, but the author wastes too much time having the MC go on adventures and fighting in dungeons. The guy is a god, not some two bit adventurer. He should be out spreading his faith, doing miracles, or god forbid fathering kids in the mortal realm like a typical god. Just seriously, this beta test smorgasbord is do or die for this webnovel. If I was the author, I'd just wrap this up within ten chapters and than choose one of the typical demi-human races like the elves, dwarves, or the beastmen. Humans are overdone, especially since you've already chose them during the beta test, you've done orcs in your other webnovel, and the probably villainous race "primal whatever" just seems a bit lazy since you get to make up everything about a made up race.
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