I feel like some parts could be written better.
I think the cover will probably not draw in as much readers.
Overall, it's a good novel, looking forward to more!
This needs to be selected
I'm sorry but I just can't take it anymore this novel is a cluster f**k of ideas a d sub plots that NEVER go anywhere. the author literally tries to give the MC everything like everything on top of everything and just when you think oh kool is gonna be OP nope he gets his ass kicked and dragged into a bunch of crap honestly I don't even think this a story about the MC I think he just gets dragged around and into crap over and over and over again half it just doesn't even make sense. it's pretty pathetic. this novel has potential but it lacks focus.
This is literally machine translated and is nearly unreadable. No aspect of the English language is done correctly. some sentences will hurt your head trying to understand.
Love this novel ❤️ hope it get chosen. Love the Mc personality, it make the novel more entertaining. Let me warn you though, I dont think a single day passed by during these 60 chapters but it didn’t actually bother me at all, it feel very natural.
There could be romance in the future. *SPOILER*
He met a female streamer in the game and completely destroyed her. Then she started paying attention to him and stuff just read it if you want more.
The MC is Overpowered. The system gave him OP ability to fk everyone with a sniper. The system also give ability that could be use outside of PUBG but that will be in the future. MC is narcissistic and handsome so yea.
Chance of Webnovel picking this? Probably less than 10% so read mtl or raw
I really like this book so far and I really hope you don't drop it I've been waiting patiently for your next update and I thought I would just let you know that you still have people here willing and waiting to read your story! Here's hoping that you will update soon.
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
It was good from start at another world to the chapter where appeared 5 no name maid's in his bed.
After that there slave seal that can edit memory and kill with a thought and it become trash story really fast.
Can read but story lose all importance.
I love, love, love this book. It starts with a bang, grabs the reader by the throat and never lets up. A captivating, action-filled novel, I cant wait for more chapters!!!!
The start has many info for my small brain to process but I get the hang of it later on.
It's a very good story, the only flaw I find in it is its slowness and its magic that I have the impression that we show in a hurry after it's my opinion, maybe you find yourself that it's too magical but I find that it's not magical enough and that it should go deeper into it
Niceee. Minimal grammar errors and a gripping sequence! I'm really really into the detective and mystery genre so I have quite high hopes with this novel :>