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I've read many story similar to this genre but this is what i want to my library because this is a very constructive and entertaining one. The humor and the scenes are what you expect to a realistic fiction.
Just by reading the synopsis I can tell it’s going to be based off of League of Legends. I’m personally not a fan of these kind of work I prefer originals. If your into ‘fanfic’ this book probably for you...
Please make his just like your other book mc...
the mfker takuya one...
Greetings I'm new to webnovel, and I chance upon your novel. I've gotta say that it is a masterpiece, one of the hidden gems out there. Keep up with it. Best regards to you and your novel. :)
Oh my god! This book is simply awesome. What an unexpected lovely story inside an apocalypse novel. I was glad that I've found this novel!
I highly recommend this novel to everyone who likes rebirth, apocalypse, mystery, and romance. I know it doesn't sound like it should come together but it does!
Though a synopsis isn't that good but gives it a try for the first five chapters, then after that, I guarantee this will be one of your favorites!
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This is complete bs, how tf did this got pick when it has lower fans than "My Learning Has Mutated". The difference is about 125 fans, 385 for dis and 510 for "My Learning Has Mutated". Absolute bs, "My Learning Has Mutated" is better than dis garbage."My Learning Has Mutated" is garbage too, but this one is on another level of garbage
The author doesn't seem to know what kind of story this should be.So, imagine a cultivation world. Is it a cultivation story? No, the main character dies. But they are reborn in a different world. Oh, it's an isekai? No, they return to their first world through a VRMMO. Hey, that's the title of the story! But they also get a system, with an AI, and nobody else has that. But it's not really a system story either.Many threads are brought up, but abandoned before they can do anything interesting. The game prevents the MC from using their prior cultivation techniques. Oh, but there might be workarounds (through the shadow clone, or eaching others). Is the MC going to do something clever to get their old techniques back? Nope, once he gets the system that restriction goes away. Nevermind then.He wants to take his human-form snake followers and take over the criminal underground. Sounds exciting! Just kidding, he dumps them on the side of the road. I guess the snakes are off in the interesting story, while we just follow the terrible MC around.Everything is like this. Oh, there's an annoying girl at school that the MC keeps rejecting but she won't get the message. Just kidding, the MC totally loves her now. Let's get married on the first date.My point is, there are deep problems with the story. The author often retcons their own story (protip: rather than add stuff to the *past*, you can actually go back and edit those chapters when those events were the *present* and put your changes there), So the foundation is constantly shifting. And that's not even touching on the many grammatical and other mistakes. I suspect the author is not very experienced in English. But even if an editor fixed these problems, the story problems would remain.The premise is interesting, but other stories have used this same premise much more effectively. The earlier chapters are OK, but there is a drop in quality later.This story can best serve as a rough outline for what the author really wants, but they have to figure that out. Finish this story, but don't drag it out. Then start rewriting it, after you have a firmer grasp of the overall plot.
well 1 star since i believe it will become a racist nationalistic novel later on so heed my advice fellow readers don't read the book and waste ur time
I really came to love this .The mc is quite likeable too .This novel has great potential .Hope you continue this author. ####£¢€¥^°°[[[={}{°°={=€££|`~`π×¶=^¥¢£|°
One of my favorite novel. Don't let give up this masterpiece please ;)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
