it is good can you guys give me RAW? ???
Great novel so far, can't wait for more.
Quite enjoyable. The intricate systems introduced in this story distinguish from those that fall under the same set of genres. Highly recommended
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Decent novel, Everyone makes it out to be a masterpiece but it's really not. There are grammar problems. The development is slow for my taste.
Not much character design you don't know a lot about the character.
Not much of any World background.
You should work on grammar and the characters a lot more if you want to improve.
Erotic scenes you say...???
Sounds interesting.........................*reads*.....
All fun aside....the synopsis looks interesting, and I have great expectations for this novel.
I just hope the will be frequent chapter updates
I know I am late for the review, but I actually enjoyed reading it. So far, I could only read 3 chapters, but I really liked the plot.
If this is your first book, then it is an good effort. The mc seems little twisted to me. But overall, everything is good.
All the best Author
I enjoy the original story quite a lot, would probably give it ~4.6 in total score. Check out THE ACTUAL AUTHOR patreon.com/puddles4263/posts who posts on RRL.
Read this novel, it's great and deserves your support, so does the author.
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The fights are well written and the storyline is great. First I was intrigued by the first chapter. Keep up the good work. I’m sure we’ll find out more about the world other than that i have no complaints.
My first comment and review for you. You have excellent and outstanding story. Best idea of fantasy genre. I believe this will be exploding soon. Good job